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A Letter at 18's Birthday Dear Mum and Dad, I'm glad to received your birthday card and the beautiful dress. On this special day, I want to expand my heartest apreciations to you. In the past 18 years, you worked hard to support our family. Without you, I couldn't get the best education. I was deeply moved by the words on the birthday card, on which you said you would always standing behind of me. Mom and Dad, never did I take your care for granted! And I will follow your advice that I will be more patient when I was dealing with other people. I promise, I will do a part-time job afer the college adimitied examination so that two months later we can travel Beijing and Taiwan with the money. Yours sincerely, Calin

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A Letter on my 18th Birthday

Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm glad to have received your birthday card and the beautiful dress. On this special day, I want to extend my warmest appreciation to you. In the past 18 years, you worked hard to support our family. Without you, I couldn't have gotten the best education.
I was deeply moved by the words on the birthday card, on which you said you would always standing behind of me. Mom and Dad, never did I take your care for granted! And I will follow your advice that I will be more patient when I was dealing with other people.
I promise, I will do a part-time job after the college admissions examination so that two months later we can travel to Beijing and Taiwan with the money.
Yours sincerely,
Calin


Just so you know, this letter sounds relatively formal for a letter from a child to their parents. Of course every family relationship is different, but in the US, for example, most children would sign the letter with "Love, Nick."

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