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LESSON NINE
Good evening !I'm watching the a film named Hostage is title and starring Bruce Willis is a principal actor,. I came home at half past nine o clock and the film had already started. I don't Know know the biggining beginning, but it seems like an at interesting movie.
My wife has cooked a vegetable soup but I don't like it. I prefer to eat pizza or spaghetti; I'm a typical Italian guy.
Many people around the world love the Italian cuisine.
Bye bye Massimo
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Very good. Comments about the corrections:
1/ You would normally use "the" if you had already identified a specific film. For example, "I was watching Jason Bourne last night. The film was about..." If you have yet to identify the film (you didn't name it until the next part of the sentence), you would use the indefinite article of "a" as I've used above.
2/ "Hostage is the title" and "is a principal actor" are both grammatically correct, but a native English speaker would not say it that way because it sounds too stilted. (That is, excessively formal.) They would use "named" and "starring" respectively.
3/ You only use O'clock with complete hours. (9 o'clock, 10 o'clock, etc.) For half hours "half past 9" by itself (or even more commonly 9:30) is fine.(O'clock is probably dying out with the digital age too. even full hours are more likely to be expressed as 9:00 or 10:00.)
4/ You need a little work at breaking up your sentences ("I don't know the beginning (etc)" is worth a separate sentence), but on the other hand you did it very well in the following paragraph.
5/ In that paragraph I've replaced the comma with a semi-colon. This is as much art as science; there are no hard and fast rules I can suggest on this. However a comma is normally used to introduce a slight pause. A semi-colon breaks up two thoughts which do fit together in a single sentence, but where the second thought introduces something new. In this example you describe the type of cuisine that you like (one part of the thought) and then explain why that is (because you're a typical Italian guy). The second part logically follows from the first part so they do fit together in a single sentence. However the first part is a statement of fact, while the second part is an explanation of that fact. They don't need to go into separate sentences but they are sufficiently different that a semi-colon is the best way of separating them. (I've probably more confused than enlightened you here, but don't worry too much about it for now; like I said, it's one of those things in English which is an art. If you ever start writing literature, you'll need to know. If you want to visit England or America, you don't.)
6/ I've highlighted "the" in Italian cuisine in green because there's nothing wrong with saying it that way. However you could also just say "Italian cuisine" here. What would a native speaker do? It's probably about a 25/75 split between those who would use "the" here and those who would not. I would not, but would not regard it as being wrong.
Of course, the statement itself is right. Ristorante Casa Mia in Via Simeto a Roma. The lasagne there is exquisite. Oh, so very, very exquisite...
LESSON NINE
Good evening !I'm watching the a film. Its title is Hostage is title and Bruce Willis is a principal actor, I came home at half past nine o clock and film had already started, I don't know the beginning, it seems an interesting movie.
My wife has cooked a vegetable soup but I don't like it. I prefer to eat pizza or spaghetti, I'm a typical Italian guy.
Many people around the world love the Italian cuisine.
Bye bye Massimo
LESSON NINE
Good evening ! ✔I'm watching the film, Hostage is title and Bruce Willis is a principal actor. I came home at half past nine o'clock and the film had already started. I don't know the beginning, it seems like an interesting movie. ✔
My wife has cooked a vegetable soup but I don't like it. I prefer to eat pizza or spaghetti, I'm a typical Italian guy. ✔
Many people around the world love the Italian cuisine. ✔
Bye bye Massimo
Bravo Massimo!
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