Good evening. Today, it was raining hard. But,  i  I went to an AFURICAN AFRICAN SAFARI with my friend. It's the famous zoo in jJapan. We're touching each other with We have touched many kinds of animals. There They are verry very cute. We had so such much fun. It made us feel the rain.

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Hi! I'm not a native English speaker, but I hope this helps!

(And it sounds like your day was a lot of fun!)

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Notes:

* No comma (,) after "but"

* The pronoun "I" is always capitalized

* Use articles before nouns ("an African safari")

* Capitalize country names ("Japan")

* I assume you wanted to say you touched the animals. "We touched each other" would mean you touched your friend, and she touched you.

ZOO :)

Today, it was raining hard. But I went to AFURICAN an AFRICAN SAFARI with my friend. It's the a famous zoo in Japan. We're touching each other with touched many kinds of animals.There are were verry very cute. We had so such fun it made us (feel) forget(?) the rain.