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Practicing some verbs The mud race is amazing! but it is too hard. You have to creep over the mud, climb a rope, lifting weights like sand bags, move wheels, jump wood walls, also running between six and eighteen kilometres (it is up to your election before the race) with your clothes wet. But It is an amazing and different experience, so, I recomend it! In ancient Rome, the Gladiators used to take a drink made with carbonized plants. It was like a sport drink of ours days, the vantage resided in the amount of minerals which has this drink. If you carbonize some plants, It shrinks the amount of the plants, causing that the amount of minerals increase in proportion. They drunk this "potion" to recover their hurts There were two causes of the Rome fall, the arrival of the barbarians and the Christianity spread

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Practising some verbs

The mud race is amazing! But it is too hard. You have to creep over the mud, climb a rope, lift weights like sand bags, move wheels, jump over wooden walls and also run between six and eighteen kilometres (it is up to your selection before the race) with your clothes wet.* But It is an amazing and different experience, so I recommend it!

In ancient Rome, the gladiators used to take a drink made with carbonized plants. It was like a sports drink in our day. Its advantage resided in the amount of minerals in it. If you carbonize some plants this shrinks them so that the minerals increase in proportion. They drank this "potion" to recover their hurts.

There were two causes for the fall of Rome; the arrival of the barbarians and the spread of Christianity.

Very well written!

*In this sentence, it is better to keep all the verbs as infinitives and avoid any ...ings; eg. climb, move, jump ... and not climb, moving, jump ..

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Practicing some verbs

The mud race is amazing! but it is too hard. You have to creep over the mud, climb a rope, lifting weights like sand bags, move wheels, jump wood walls, and also running between six and eighteen kilometres (it is up to your election (1) before the race) with your clothes wet. But It is an amazing and different experience, so, I recomend it!

In ancient Rome, the Gladiators used to take a drink made with carbonized plants. It was like a sport drink of our day, the advantage resided in the amount of minerals which has this drink (2). If you carbonize some plants, It shrinks the amount of the plant (3), causing that the amount of minerals increase in proportion. They drunk this "potion" to recover from their injuries / muscle soreness

There were two causes of the Rome fall  the fall of Rome, the arrival of the barbarians and the  spread of Christianity (4)

1 it is up to you to choose before the race / it is your choice before the race

2  ...minerals in this drink

3 ...it shrinks the amount of vegetable matter, causing...

4...fall of Rome...   en ingles a menudo podemos usar un substantive como adjective, eg  "Rome fall" pero a menudo no lo podemos y usamos una formula como los espanoles la caida de Roma.  en realidad No puedes decir "Rome fall"--muy raro

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