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Is theoretical knowledge important to one's career achievement? (Part 2) On the other hand, we should recognise the fact that theories are not the only factor of being success. It is interesting to not that a great number of successful men are considered to have the similar personality traits. Those who are optimistic, passionate, industrious and good at interpersonal skills can conquer difficulties and cooperate with others, and then achieve success efficiently. Another factor contributing to success might be social network, through what people can collect information, ideas and various resources. For instance, businessmen are willing to get more information easily because they know how to keep close relationship with governments, which skill does not probably appear in textbooks.

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Is theoretical knowledge important to one's career achievements? (Part 2)

On the other hand, we should recognise the fact that theories are not the only factor in being success. It is interesting to note that a great number of successful men are considered to have the similar personality traits. Those who are optimistic, passionate, industrious and good at interpersonal skills can conquer difficulties and cooperate with others, and then achieving success efficiently. Another factor contributing to success might be social networks, through which people can collect information, ideas and various resources. For instance, businessmen are willing able? to get more information easily because they know how to keep close relationship with governments, which skill does not probably appear in textbooks.



Being successful is a state, so we are 'in' it.

Achieving success is done by means of "conquer difficulties and cooperate with other", so you don't need 'and then'. However, If you mean that is happens afterwards, sequentially, then this is correct.


Are you talking about an ability or a desire in the last sentence? If the former, I suggest 'able'

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