LESSON SIX
Good evening!
Today I'm very happy, yesterday my favorite soccer club, Torino's club won vs Roma football club for three goal to one, but I was angry also because my car broke; I hope it is nothing serious.
Today I started to read the cugin's book, he is the author; the title is "the voice of the poet".
The author is mother's cugin, he lives in Canada but he was born in Italy from Calabria country.
The book is in bilingual, it were write in italy language and traslator in english language or contrary, I don't know.
Thank you for your correct, bye Massimo
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LESSON SIX
Good evening!Today I'm very happy, because (two sentences, need a connector. "because" is good because second sentence explains the first.) yesterday my favorite soccer club, Torino's cClub, (need a "," here to set off "Torino's club", which modifies "my favorite soccer club")won vs Roma football club for three goal to one., bBut I was angry also because my car broke; I hope it is nothing serious. (Too many phrases with connectors. Need to break them up into separate sentences.)
Today I started to read the cCugin's book, he is the author; the title is "the voice of the poet".
The author is mother's cugin(I don't understand this sentence.), he lives in Canada but he was born in Italy from Calabria country.
The book is in bilingual, it were writewas written in italy languageItalian and traslaedtor into eEnglish language(language names, e.g., English or Italian, always capitalized. No need to say "language" after the language name. It's OK, but is unnecessary and sounds funny.) or vice versa.contrary, I don't know.
Thank you for your corrections., bBye Massimo
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LESSON SIX
Good evening!Today I'm very happy., yesterday Yesterday my favorite soccer club, Torino's club Torino FC won vs against Roma Football Club for by three goals to one., but However I was also angry also because my car broke down; I hope it is nothing serious.
I'm not sure what you're getting at with the next couple of sentences. I can't find a book titled "The Voice Of The Poet" by any author named "cugin". Did you actually mean that it was written by a cousin (cugino in Italian)?
Today I started to read the cugin's book, he is the author; the title is "the voice of the poet".
The author is mother's cugin, he lives in Canada but he was born in Italy from Calabria country.
If so, you could say it like this:
Today I started to read a book titled "The Voice Of The Poet". The author is my mother's cousin. He lives in Canada, but was born in Calabria, Italy.
The book is in bilingual, it were write was written in italy language Italian and traslator in english language translated into English. or contrary, I don't know. (Or perhaps the other way around; I'm not sure.)
Thank you for your correct corrections, bye Massimo
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A good effort, because English is not easy. I will put some explanations of the corrections in comments below.
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LESSON SIX
Good evening!Today I'm very happy, yesterday my favorite soccer club, Torino's club won vs Roma football club for three goal to one, but I was angry also because my car broke; I hope it is nothing serious.
Today I started to read the Cugin's book, he is the author; the title is "The Voice of the Poet".
The author is mother's cugin, he lives in Canada but he was born in Italy from Calabria country.
The book is in bilingual, it was writen in Italian and traslated in english language or contrary, I don't know.
Thank you for your correct, bye Massimo
Very great with few errors. Keep it up! :)
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Ciao Massimo!
LESSON SIX
Good evening!Today I'm very happy. Yesterday my favorite soccer club, Torino's club won vs against the Roma football club for by three goals to one, but I was also angry also because my car broke down; I hope it is nothing serious. ✔
Today I started to read the cugin's my cousin's book, he is the author; the title is "the voice of the poet". ✔
The author is my mother's cousin, he lives in Canada but he was born in Italy from Calabria country. ✔
The book is in bilingual, it were was writen in the italian language and traslated into the english language or contrary vise versa, I don't know. ✔
Thank you for your corrections, bye Massimo ✔
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