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A letter about problems with the job.
You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks you realized there were some problems with the job.Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
-- explain why you took the job
-- describe the problems that you experienced
-- suggest what could be done about them.
Write at least 150 words.
"Dear Mr
I am writing this letter to inform you about a few minor problems I have had since i was hired by your company.
I began to working for your the company in at the beginning of August of 2016. My current position is a that of part-time industrial safety consultant or you could say I am currently employed as a part-time industrial safety consultant.
I embarked applied for this position mainly for next several reasons:
- flexible schedule of work; or flexible working hours
-ability to work distantly remotely (one of the biggest parts of my work is the investigation of safety cases and the writing of reports).
During my career in the West Consultancy I faced next several problems:
Firstly, I have noticed that many of emails that have been we sent to our clients from our mail server went have gone astray.
Secondly, some additional information about safety cases which I investigated were was not up-to-date updated.
Thirdly, three times on three occasions I could not get an accurate schedule of our on line meetings which were provided by means of video conferencing.
I would recommend to undertake next that the following corrective measures are put in place to improve our current situation with information support:
- We should hire a permanent computer administrator who would be able to maintain our servers on daily basis.
- A member of our office staff should be responsible Somebody from our office assistant should for keeping all information on the our web portal up to date.
I look forward to your response to my proposal or I look forward to receiving your thoughts on my proposals.Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely
Artem R.
Well done!
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