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"My experience of visiting Rammstein concert Or how to stay alive" Hello guys! Have you ever been to metal concerts? If your answer is "yes", you are probably aware of the fact that such concerts are not for weak and nervous men!) This year I've been to Rammstein concert ( German metal band) plus there were four more bands performing before the headliner, so it was kind of Festival. The show started at 3pm but some crazy fans spent night near the gate hoping to be first in the queue in the morning. I came at about 7:30 and there were about 50-60 fans already. By 12:00 there was a tremendous line in front of the gate, which policemen tried to fence. The pressure in the crowd was pretty high so one couldn't even seat, we had to stand all the time not to lose our place in the line. When gates were opened crowd rushed to another gate where they had to throw out water and sharp accessories. Next point was check-in, the crowed rushed again, here staff put on bracelets on our hands. And final distance was way to the stage. As I had ticket to fan zone it really made sense to run fast!;))) The faster you run the closer to the band you stand! I was in the second line- in front of Till Lindemann! Probably the most tiring part was waiting for Headliner for 6 hours: sweaty crowd, not enough water, not enough room to sit. Many people fell unconscious , it was scary a bit! BUT when Rammstein got started we forgot all our tiredness! 1.5 hours of show passed incredibly fast! The pyrotechnics was fascinating, I nearly had feeling that my skin and eyebrows were burnt totally! It was also incredible when the whole stadium was singing the refrain and switched on flashlights on their phones. When I looked around I had strong feeling that I'm in the deep space with billions of stars around! When we were leaving the stadium fans were singing song "Moskau", we definitely felt like a unity in out love to Rammstein:) So my advice to people who are up to go to the Metal concert for the first time: * Take enough water with you. * Girls, braid your hair. * If there is a crush try to stay on your feet - fell down = got injured, lift your hands a bit not to make the crowd pressure your lungs. * Do not take rucksacks and bags with you, better keep things in pockets. * If you are in the fan zone forget the morality and try to be in the head of the line ! (I'm serious;))! * Try to stay away from slam. Second note is a bit long but I hope it will be useful for some of you! Still looking forward to hear your corrections!

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"My experience of visiting a Rammstein concert Or how to stay alive"

Hello guys!
Have you ever been to metal concerts? If your answer is "yes", you are probably aware of the fact that such concerts are not for weak and nervous (men!)
This year I went to a Rammstein concert (German metal band) plus there were four more supporting bands performing before the headliner, so it was a kind of festival.
The show started at 3pm but some crazy fans spent the night near the gate hoping to be first in the queue in the morning. I came at about 7:30 and there were about 50-60 fans there already.
By 12:00 there was a tremendous line in front of the gate which the police tried to fence. The pressure in the crowd was pretty high so we couldn't even sit and we had to stand all the time (so as)* not to lose our place in the line. When the gates were opened the crowd rushed to another gate where they had to throw out water and sharp accessories.
Next point was check-in and the crowed rushed forward again. Here staff put bracelets on our hands. The final stretch was clear to the stage. As I had a ticket to the fan zone it really made sense to run fast!;)))
The faster you run the closer to the band you stand! I was in the second line- in front of Till Lindemann!
Probably the most tiring part was waiting for Headliner for 6 hours: sweaty crowd, not enough water, not enough room to sit. Many people fell unconscious. It was a bit scary!
BUT when Rammstein got started we forgot all our tiredness! 1.5 hours of the show passed incredibly fast! The pyrotechnics were fascinating. I nearly had the feeling that my skin and eyebrows were burnt totally! It was also incredible when the whole stadium was singing the refrain and switched on flashlights from their phones. When I looked around I had strong feeling that I'm in deep space with billions of stars around!
When we were leaving the stadium fans were singing "Moskau" and we definitely felt like a unity** in our love for Rammstein:)

So my advice to people who are up to go to the Metal concert for the first time:
* Take enough water with you.
* Girls, braid your hair.
* If there is a crush try to stay on your feet - fall down = get injured - lift your hands a bit (so as)* not to make the crowd pressure your lungs.
* Do not take rucksacks and bags with you; better keep things in pockets.
* If you are in the fan zone forget the morality and try to be at the head of the line ! (I'm serious;))!
* Try to stay away from (slam.?) 

Second note is a bit long but I hope it will be useful for some of you!
Still looking forward to hear your corrections!

*optional

**or, we felt as one in our love ...

Very well written!

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"My experience of visiting a Rammstein concert Or how to stay alive"

Hello guys!
Have you ever been to metal concerts? If your answer is "yes", you are probably aware of the fact that such concerts are not for weak and nervous men!)
This year I've been to a Rammstein concert ( a German metal band) plus there were four more bands performing before the headliner, so it was a kind of Festival.
The show started at 3pm but some crazy fans spent the night near the gate hoping to be first in the queue in the morning. I came at about 7:30 and there were about 50-60 fans there already.
By 12:00 there was a tremendous line in front of the gate, which policemen tried to fence off. The pressure in the crowd was pretty high so one couldn't even sit down so we had to stand all the time so as not to lose our place in the line. When the gates were opened the crowd rushed to another gate where they had to hand in water and sharp accessories.
Thw next point was getting in and the crowed rushed again, here staff put on bracelets on our hands. And the final stretch  was the way to the stage. As I had a ticket to the fan zone it really made sense to run fast!;)))
The faster you run the closer to the band you stand! I was in the second row- in front of Till Lindemann!
Probably the most tiring part was waiting for the headliner for 6 hours: a sweaty crowd, not enough water, not enough room to sit. Many people fell unconscious , it was a bit scary!
BUT when Rammstein got started we forgot all our tiredness! 1.5 hours of the show passed incredibly fast! The pyrotechnics were fascinating, I almost had the feeling that my skin and eyebrows were burnt totally! It was also incredible when the whole stadium was singing the refrain and switched on the flashlights on their phones. When I looked around I had the strong feeling that I was in the deep space with billions of stars around!
When we were leaving the stadium fans were singing song "Moskau", we definitely felt like a unity in our love for Rammstein:)



Second note is a bit long but I hope it will be useful for some of you!
Still, I'm looking forward to reading your corrections!
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So my advice to people who are up to go to the Metal concert for the first time: 
* Take enough water with you. 
* Girls, braid your hair. 
* If there is a crush try to stay on your feet - fall down = get injured, lift up your hands a bit not to make the crowd put pressure on your lungs. 
* Do not take rucksacks and bags with you, better keep things in your pockets. 
* If you are in the fan zone forget about  morality and try to be atthe head of the line ! (I'm serious;))! 
* Try to stay away from slam. (= ???)

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