Beijing
I took a trip to Beijing, the capital of China. There are too many people in this city. And, there are many cars.
The traffic is really bad, and the things are really expensive.
However, as the biggest cities in China, it have many interesting places, and there are many kinds delicious food.
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Beijing
I took a trip to Beijing, the capital of China. There are too many people in this city. And, there are many cars. Sentences cannot begin with "and" and the comma goes before the "and." Change to "...city, and there..."
The traffic is really bad, and the things are really expensive.
Good job here!^ Side note: comma not needed, but you may see it sometimes. It is better without it, but great job other than that!
However, as the biggest cities in China, it have many interesting places, and there are many kinds delicious food.
1. Change it to "city" since it one city and not more.
2. Change to "has" since it is "it" and not "they/we/you/I" for the pronoun
3. You can write this as," ...many interesting places and delicious kinds of food." There is no comma needed and you do not need "there are" or "many" in the sentence, because you have already said,"many" before.
I hope this helps!
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