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The floss-silk tree outside my window窗外的美人树 I like this season, not too cold nor too hot.The sky is always blue and a lot of sunshine in my city. The flower tree opened quietly outside my window. Every day I pull my curtain a beautiful flower picture catched my eyes.A lot of pink folwers on the tree makes me very moved.The tree is called floss-silk tree.

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The fFloss-Ssilk Ttree outside my window 窗外的美人树 (name of trees are always in Capitals:) 

I like this season, it's not too cold nor (or) too hot.The sky is always blue and there's a lot of sunshine in my city. The This flowering tree opensed quietly outside of my window. Every day I pull (open) my curtains and a beautiful flower picture catchesd my eyes. A lot of pink folwers flowers are on the tree,  this moves me very much.  makes me very moved. The tree is called the Ffloss-Ssilk Ttree.


The phrase catches my 'eye' - usually eye is singular.  

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The floss-silk tree outside my window窗外的美人树

I like this season, it's not too cold nor too hot.The sky is always blue and  there is a lot of sunshine in my city. The flowers on the tree opened (bloomed) quietly outside my window. Everyday I pull my curtain, a beautiful flower picture catches my eyes. A lot of pink flowers on the tree makes me very moved moves me very much.The tree is called floss-silk tree.


For your first sentence, you can also say - "It's not hot nor cold". Good work otherwise :)

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