One strange day
One day when I was walking for an alleyway I found a book, when I over to it, the books was complete, whitout damage or wet, so I picked it and when I open the book the first thing that I saw was one image, then I loose laughter because the picture I remembered that the life is beautifull and wonderfull, and I was drowning in a glass og water.
Remember the life can be hard, for this fact not is boring, it's exciting
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One Strange Day
One day when I was walking through an alleyway I found a book, when I walked over to it, the book was complete, and without damage so I picked it up and when I opened the book, the first thing that I saw was an image, [[then I let loose laughter because the picture reminded me that the life is beautiful and wonderful, and I was drowning in a glass of water.]]Remember that life can be hard, because of this fact, it is not boring, but exciting.
Translation note: Saying that the book has no damage let's the reader, or listener, know that it would also have no water damage. I'm sorry but when I changed the part which read [[then I ... glass of water]] I may have changed the meaning significantly. Hope this helped, and hope you continue to learn English, you are doing great so far!
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When I said "I was drowning in a glass og water" I will want to said "made a mountain out of a molehil"
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