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A JOB INTERVIEW....help me¡¡ Hello My name is Leonardo, I´m 25 years old and i´m from Querétaro Mexico. I´m Industrial Engineer; in the last days I have been looking a job. Yesterday i went to an job interview, they ask me about my life and expertise, they did it using spanish and english. I was very nervous, because the english is dificult for me, that is the reason that i´m learning..... Guess what? The ask me my resume in english.... And i will aprecciate if you can help me to show me the mistakes. please? I have a problem, i think spanish then i translate to english...:S "Industrial engineer with expertise in production planning, lean manufacturing and lean management. My professional goal is to develop my knowledge and skills in the automotive industry, always fulfilling responsibilities and seeking continuous improvement" 1. Function: Member of the advisory team, a role that was highlighted by imparting training and advice on issues of Operational Excellence as an agenda Genchi Genbutsu, measurement and analysis of OEE, A3 PDCA, DMAIC, VSM, SMED, kaizen events, 5S´s , work system standard, strategic planning and deployment Hoshin Kanri. Responsible for sales work training packages and counseling. Achievements: Compliance sales target, and advised clients in remarkable results. 2. Function: Responsible for production planning of washers and dryers, i did demand analysis, review available materials, management constraints of materials and production, preparation of master production plan, creation of production orders , monitoring the production and support logistics for shipments in a timely manner. Achievements: Stabilization KPI`s the area, reduced planning cycle time, reduce logistics costs and a higher percentage of shipments in time was achieved.

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Interviewing for a job is always a scary experience. I am a recruiter who works only within the STEM (science, technology, engineering, and math) vertical, so you are in the right place for help! 


Industrial engineer with expertise in production planning, lean manufacturing, and lean management.
My professional goal is to develop my knowledge and skills in the automotive industry, always fulfilling responsibilities and seeking continuous improvement.

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Function: Member of the advisory team, a role that was highlighted by imparting training others and providing advice on issues of Operational Excellence in accordance with Genchi Genbutsu.  I also performed measurement and analysis of OEE, A3/PDCA, DMAIC, VSM, SMED, Kaizen events, 5S, work system standard, strategic planning, and Hoshin Kanri deployment.
I was responsible for sales work, training packages, and counseling coaching others. 

Achievements: Compliance sales target, and advised clients in remarkable results.*

*This sentence is confusing to me. Do you mean to say that you hit the sales goals and achieved remarkable results for the clients? 

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Function: Responsible for production planning for a manufacturer of washers and dryers. I performed demand analysis, reviewed available materials, determined the management constraints of materials and production, prepared the master production plan, created the production orders, monitored the production and supported logistics for shipments in a timely manner.

Achievements: Stabilized KPIs for the area, reduced planning cycle time, reduced logistics costs, and achieved a higher percentage of shipments on time. was achieved.

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