Diary: 003
This is my 3rd diary entry. If you have a free moment, could you correct it for me? Thanks!
Have you talked to anyone over the phone today?
→Yes, I talked to my boss over the phone in this morning. She asked me about my working shift and told me I had to increase my shift. So now I have no day off on weekend in November. I felt uncomfortable to talk to her, but I couldn't say ”No.” Because she is my boss.
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Diary: 003
This is my 3rd diary entry. If you have a free moment, could you correct it for me? Thanks!Have you talked to anyone over the phone today?
→Yes, I talked to my boss over the phone in this morning. She discussed asked me about my working shifts and told me I had to increase my shifts. So now I have no day off on at weekends in November. I felt uncomfortable talking to talk to her, but I couldn't say ”No,” because she is my boss.
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Diary: 003
This is my 3rd diary entry. If you have a free moment, could you correct it for me? Thanks!Have you talked spoken to anyone over the phone today? (I would personally use "spoken" instead of talked)
→Yes, I talked spoke to my boss over the phone in this morning. She asked me about my working shifts and told me I had to increase my number of shifts. So now I have no day off on any weekend in November. I felt uncomfortable to talk to her (It's better to say:) I wasn't happy with what she was requesting , but I couldn't say ”No” because she is my boss.
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