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the lessons in my school There are a lot of interesting lessons in my school.But if you want to go to a good lesson at Friday afternoon, you need to do a lot of things. First, you need to decide which lesson you want to take.There are a lot of good lessons, I don't even know to choose which lesson.And after I choose my favorite class, the worst thing is that my mom don't let me go to some classes.She said that I need to go to some good classes(she thinks they are ) like Math, English and Chinese.At last, she agreed me to go to yoga class. Second, you need to have a very fast computer.Because that we need to go to the internet and choose the class that you want to take.And there are more than one thousand people in my school, so many people all go on the same internet at the same time,so if you want to get a good lesson, you need have a speedy computer. I hope I can get a better next time. Thank you very much!

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the lessons in my school

There are a lot of interesting lessons in my school.But if you want to go to a good lesson at on a Friday afternoon, you need to do a lot of things.
First, you need to decide which lesson you want to take.There are a lot of good lessons, I don't even know *how* to choose which lesson.  And after I choose my favorite class, the worst thing is that my mom do*es*n't let me go to some classes.She said that I need to go to some good classes(she thinks they are ones that she thinks are good ) like Math, English and Chinese.At last, she agreed that I could me to go to yoga class.
Second, you need to have a very fast computer.Because that we need you have to go to the internet and choose the class that you want to take.And there are more than one thousand people in my school, so many people all go on the same internet at the same time,so if you want to get a good lesson, you need have a speedy computer.
I hope I can get better next time.
Thank you very much!
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Lessons in my school

There is a lot of interesting lessons at my school. But if you want to go to a good lesson on Friday afternoon, you will have to do a lot of things.
Firstly, you have to decide which lesson you want to take. There is a lot of good lessons/classes. I don't even know which lesson I have to choose. And then I choose my favorite class. The worst thing is that my mom doesn't  let me go to some classes. She said that I should visit some good classes (she thinks they are.) like math, English and Chinese. At last, she permitted me to go to yoga classes.
Secondly, you need to have a very fast computer, because you need to go to the internet and choose the class that you want to take. And there are more than one thousand people in my school. So many people all use the same internet at the same time and so if you want to get a good lesson, you need have a speedy computer.
I hope I will buy a better one next time.
Thank you very much!

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