MY BUSY DAY
I woke at 6:30 am today. Yesterday my teacher told me she likes the potato cake I make and asked me whether I can make for her. Of course I said it is OK beacase I have time to make it. So I bought two potatoes two eggs and some flour in the morning in the surpermarket.The I washed the potatoes, cutted them into shreds.Then I added some flour and two eggs to the potato shreds. The first cake was not perfect because the flour was not enough. When I make the second cake I found that I forgot to put salt so the cake tasted so bad. Last I make another one, luckily the thired cake tasted delicious.What I want to say is that the three cakes took me three hours and I had to go to work in the afternoon because I have night shift tonight.
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MY BUSY DAY
I woke up at 6:30 a.m. today. Yesterday my teacher told me she liked the potato cake I made and asked me whether or not I can make it for her again. Of course, I said it was OK beacase I had time to make it, so I bought two potatoes, two eggs and some flour in the morning at a surpermarket.I washed the potatoes and cut them into shreds.Then, I added some flour and two eggs to the potato shreds. The first cake was not perfect because the flour was not enough. When I made the second cake, I found that I forgot to put salt, so the cake tasted so bad. Finally, I made another one. Luckily, the third cake tasted delicious. What I want to say is that the three cakes took me three hours and I had to go to work in the afternoon because I have night shift tonight.
Thank you for correction.
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Wow! I cannot believe that you baked a cake three times within a day, and it was for your teacher! You are so nice.
I made some simple grammatical corrections.
1. The past tense of the verb "cut" is simply "cut," not "cutted."
2. Please make sure you keep one tense within a sentence. Sometimes, you mixed past tense and present tense.
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