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Corrections: Part 2
About five seconds passed away and - incredibly - we heard a resonant barking! But from where? From the coop with the black, charming dog. Enchanted, we came back for a while and our dog was back behaving like an angel. We look at the grids {enclosure}, but there was no name, no story to talk about. Other dogs had information, but next to this one, the side for the information card was empty. Why? Did he already come here? What was his past? Unfortunately, the time for visiting the shelter was over and we even couldn't weren't able to ask about this dog.
Today, I thought that maybe we should come go back there to the shelter. But my brother has found an internet notice about another dog, a jack russell terrier, which that someone wanted to surrender. He always wanted to have a dog of this race, so I agree and tomorrow, we are going to the a town located 80 km from our city to see and probably take this dog. But in my mind, there's still the black dog, staying behind grids... and yelping when as we were leaving the shelter...
*Very good job, just some tenses needed to be changed because you are telling a story that happened in the past.
Part 1:Corrections
A Black Story at the Dog Shelter
A few days ago, we, at long last decided: Yes! We' ll take adopt a dog! And these past two days were really full of emotion.Yesterday, I was in a dog shelter in Cracow to look at the dogs that were there. This was my first time that I had been to any animal shelter. Everything that I had seen there was so sad. I was walking next to coops in which every dog wanted to get my attention. In each set of eyes, I had seen a silent supplication, saying "Please, take me away from this hell. I need your love...". Most of the dogs were just barking. But at one moment all of a sudden, we saw a black dog, which that was just staying in place and staring at us. He looked like scared; there was only him in his box. I squatted and said something to him and suddenly, his tail slowly started to wag... There was a short flash in his eyes - the flash of hope, a flash of surprise that anyone can someone could be interested in him. We had to go on further, so we left our charming dog.
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