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My wedding I was married 2 years ago. One of my brother's friends offered me proposal. He was educated and has a kind heart. I talked to him a lot and after few months I got it that he could be my husband. Unfortunately my family were quite disagree! and tried to change my opinion about him. About one year it took time I could accept positive vote of my family. But I knew that they never be agree with my husband in their hearts. Fortunately, nowadays, my husband could prove his kindnesses and my family loves him. I think my husband has a pure heart so that everybody likes to companion with him. I'm proud of him.

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My wedding

I was married 2 years ago. One of my brother's friends offered me A proposal (usually we say proposed to me). He was educated and has a kind heart. I talked to him a lot and after few months I got it (I would use knew) that he could be my husband. Unfortunately my family were quite disagreed! and tried to change my opinion about him. About one year it took time I could accept positive vote of my family (I would say: "it took about one year before my family approved of my husband"). But I knew that they would never be agree with my husband in their hearts. Fortunately, nowadays, my husband could prove his kindnesses and my family loves him. I think my husband has a pure heart so and that everybody likes to companion with him (I would say: wants to be around him). I'm proud of him.


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My wedding

I got married 2 years ago. One of my brother's friends proposed to me. He was well educated and had a kind heart. I talked to him a lot, and after a few months, I thought that he could be my husband. Unfortunately, my family was quite a problem! and tried to change my mind about him. It took my family almost one year to accept my husband. But I knew deep down in their hearts they've never agreed on him. Fortunately, nowadays, my husband could prove his kindnesses and my family loves him. I think my husband has a pure heart so that everybody likes to be with him. I'm proud of him.


God bless you two!!

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My wedding

I was got married 2 years ago. One of my brother's friends had proposed to me offered me proposal. He was is educated and has a kind heart. > I got married 2 years ago, after I accepted a marriage proposal from a friend of my brother.

I talked to him a lot, and after few months, I got it realised that he could be my future husband. > I used to talk to him a lot , and after a few months as friends, I realised that he could be a suitable life long partner.

Unfortunately, my family were quite disagree against our marriage and attempted to change my opinion about him.

About one year it took time I could accept positive vote of my family. x >  It took me about one year to have their blessings for us to get married.

But I knew that they were still never be agree unhappy with my husband deep down in their hearts.

Fortunately, nowadays, my husband could prove his kindnesses and my family loves him.X > Fortunately, my husband was able to prove to them about how a kind person he is , and my parents love him now.

I think my husband has a pure heart, so that everybody likes to be his companion with him. I'm proud of him. > I think my husband has a good heart , and everyone who knows him want to be his friends . I am proud of him.

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My wedding

I was married 2 years ago. One of my brother's friends offered me proposal. He was educated and has a kind heart. I talked to him a lot and after few months I got it that he could be my husband. Unfortunately my family were quite disagree! and tried to change my opinion about him. About one year it took time I could accept positive vote of my family. But I knew that they never be agree with my husband in their hearts. Fortunately, nowadays, my husband could prove his kindnesses and my family loves him. I think my husband has a pure heart so that everybody likes to companion with him. I'm proud of him.


My wedding

I got married two years ago. One of my brother's friends proposed to me. He was educated and has a kind heart. I talked to him a lot and after few months, I got it, he could be my husband. Unfortunately, my family disagreed and tried to change my mind. One year later, I could accept a positive vote from my family. I knew they never agreed my husband in their hearts. Fortunately, nowadays, my husband proves his kindnesses and my family loves him. I think my husband has a pure heart so everybody likes to be his companion. I'm proud of him

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