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Apology for the noise Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize. Describe what action you will take. 'Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson. I am writing you this letter to express my sincere apology for that unacceptable noise our family caused last night. As you know our family have a dog and you could see us walking with it through our local park zone many times. Its name is Jersey and its breed is Scottish collie. This dog is an integral part of our family and it has lived with us for last ten years. My children are very happy to play with it and they spend a lot of time together. My family and our landlord Mr. Samuel Hopes have strong arrangements about possibility to have this dog in our flat and this issue is described in our rental agreement. Unfortunately, last night our dog suffered of unbearable stomachache and it caused that incessant barks and howling. Fortunately, we were managed to call our local veterinarian Mr. Edwards and he gave it all necessary pills which relieved its pain. He explained us that this ache was related to ageing of our dog and prescribed to give it this pills regularly. I hope you could understand and excuse us for such situation. I promise to undertake all possible measures to not bother your family again. Please, accept our apology. Sincerely yours Mr. and Mrs. Rogers.'

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Apology for the noise

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize.
Describe what action you will take.


'Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson.

I am writing you this letter to express my sincere apology for thе unacceptable noise our family caused last night.

As you know our family has a dog and you might have seen us walking with him through (around?) our local park zone many times. His name is Jersey and his breed is Scottish collie. This dog is an integral part of our family and it has lived with us for the last ten years. My children are very happy to play with him and they spend a lot of time together.

My family and our landlord Mr. Samuel Hopes have a clear understanding strong arrangements about possibility to have us having this dog in our flat and this issue is described in our rental agreement.

Unfortunately, last night our dog suffered of an unbearable stomach ache and that it caused that incessant barking and howling. Fortunately, we were managed to call our local veterinarian Mr. Edwards and he gave him all the  necessary pills, which relieved his pain. He explained to us that this ache was related to ageing of our dog's old age and prescribed to give it these pills to him regularly.

I hope you could understand and excuse us for such situation. I promise to undertake all possible measures to not bother your family again.

Please, accept our apology.

Sincerely yours
Mr. and Mrs. Rogers.'


PS: I've changed the pronouns for the dog from "it" to "he/him/his". A dog can be "it" when it's just an animal, so using "it/its" is not grammatically wrong, but I think that, when it's a family pet, and especially if it has a name, most people would call the dog he/she, rather than it.




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Apology for the noise

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize.
Describe what action you will take.


Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson.

I am writing (you) this letter to express my sincere apology for that the unacceptably loud noise  my dog/our family /made caused last night.

As you know, our family have a dog, and you could might have seen us walking with it through around our local park zone many times. Its name is Jersey and it's breed is a Scottish collie. This dog is an integral part of our family, and it has lived with us for the last ten years. My children are very happy whenever they to play with it, and they spend a lot of time together.

My family and our landlord, Mr. Samuel Hopes, had reached an understanding strong arrangements -- before we moved in -- that permits us about possibility to have this dog in our flat, and this issue permission is described clearly stated in our rental agreement.

Unfortunately, last night our dog suffered of from a severe case of  unbearably  stomach ache last night,  and it caused my dog to that incessant bark and howl incessantly and howling. Fortunately, we were managed to call our local veterinarian, Mr. Edwards, and he gave it all the necessary pills, which eventually relieved its pain. He explained to us that this ache stomach problem was related due to its old age ageing of our dog and prescribed told us to give it these pills to our dog on a regular basis/regularly.

I hope you could will understand and excuse us for the inconvenience caused you such situation. I promise to undertake all possible measures to stop my dog from becoming a nuisance to  not bother your family again.

Please accept our (sincere) apology.

Sincerely yours
Mr. and Mrs. Rogers.

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