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The mid-autumn Festival---15 of the 16 round moon The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in china,we eat moon cakes(月饼)during the mid-autumn festival,the most delicious mooncake is make by elder in famliy(i would take a picture for you,but all cakes were ate up,even me just ate one(ㄒoㄒ))。There has a proverb about moon of mid-autumn festival--15 of the 16 round moon(十五的月亮十六圆),it means the moon turns perfect round on the day after mid-autumn day(i realy don’t know how to translate),the picture was taken at last night ,it is rond ,isn't it?

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The mid-autumn Festival---15 of the 16 round moon

The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China,we eat moon cakes(月饼)during the mid-autumn festival, the most delicious mooncake is usually prepared by the oldest family member.(I would take a picture so you could see what a mooncake looks like but we've eaten them already, incluiding me (ㄒoㄒ))。There is a proverb about moon of mid-autumn festival--15 of the 16 round moon(十五的月亮十六圆),it means the moon turns perfect round on the day after mid-autumn day(i realy don’t know how to translate),the picture was taken at last night ,it is rond = round ,isn't it?


 I've corrected and changed some things, but it is just my opinion. Keep practicing :) you're very good!

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