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A Letter To My Advisor Today I have to send a letter to advisor of my dissertation. Is it ok?? Dear Prof. Amini I hope you are doing well. I have launched the phase one and it is in progress. I hope to accomplish the phases one & two until next 5 months. About sabbatical period, my program for it is consist of: 1- Running the phase three 2-Analysis of the project results and writing the related essays under your supervision. If you are agree with it, please let me to have your acceptance letter to apply the sabbatical period. I think, March until September in 2017 (six months) could be a suitable time if you be agree. I promise you to be a quite full-time researcher in your laboratory to get valuable experiences.

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Note: In English, following the verb "to let," we do not use the full infinitive. We use something called the 'zero infinitive,' (the infinitive minus the word to which would normally appear in front of it) which is why your sentence should read "If you are in agreement, please let me have your acceptance..............." rather than "to have," your acceptance letter. The same is true of our verb "to make," - the zero infinitive should follow it. Also, following modal verbs such as "must," and "should."
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A Letter To My Advisor

Today I have to send a letter to advisor of my dissertation. Is it ok??

Dear Prof. Amini
I hope you are doing well.

I have launched the phase one and it is in progress. I hope to accomplish  *complete* the phases one & two until  within the next 5 months.

About *Regarding* the sabbatical period, my program for it is consist*s* of:
1- Running the phase three
2-Analysis of the project results and writing the related essays under your supervision.

If you are *in* agree*ment* with it, please let me to have your acceptance letter to apply *for* the sabbatical period. I think, March until September in 2017 (six months) could be a suitable time if you be agree.
I promise you to that I will be a quite full-time dedicated researcher in your laboratory, gaining to get valuable experiences.

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