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12 September. Shopping center Today I spand most pat of day in the shopping center. It was really hard for me. I try to keep out of such place but circumstances forced me to do it. I came to Moscow for the job interview on one day and with mission "don't spend money" If you need wi-fi and calm it became not so simple mission. For example you can use the metro and milling around by ring line. There is free wi-fi but no calm. Else you can sit in the park. There is calm and bad fi-wi. I chose the shopping center. Here I can drink my testy herbal tea from the thermos and eat my dinner with a penny busters from supermarket instead of spoon. But need to be carefully for will not eat all spoons early than dinner, like me) I had been listening interview in English, drowning and chating with my friends by Facebook and I needed in all my concentration for abstract of atmosphere pointless fuss. Nobody is running or crying. Everybody is looking calm and I don't know why I am filling like something pushing on me hear, like I do something that I don`t want and shouldn't to do.

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September 12th: Shopping Center

Today I spent most of the day in the shopping center. It was really hard for me. I try to keep out of such places, but circumstances forced me to do it. I came to Moscow for a job interview for one day with the mission "don't spend money". If you need wi-fi and no noise, it is not a simple mission. For example, you can use the metro and go around by ring line. There is free wi-fi, but it is noisy. If you sit in the park, then there is no noise and bad wi-fi. I chose the shopping center. Here I can drink my tasty herbal tea from the thermos and eat my dinner of penny busters with a spoon from the supermarket. Yet, I need to be careful, because I will not eat all my vegetables first, but I will eat the penny busters. I had been listening to the interview in English and chatting with my friends by Facebook, and I needed all my concentration, so I wouldn't pay attention to the meaningless bustle. Nobody is running, crying, or being loud. Everybody is looking relaxed, and I don't know why I am feeling like something is controlling my heart, like I am doing something that I don`t want to do and shouldn't do.

Please rephrase the words in bold, and I will do more corrections. Thank you for learning my language :).

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