Thinking about afterlife
Today I was booked up. my essay writing, home works, and etc. during my activities I thought about afterlife! what is it? is it true or not? I thought about some quotes from celebrities that I studied before. Eventually, I thought that till about next 70 years, all people in the world would be change and new people continue life! And this life's circle there is for millions years!!
Therefore, there is a strong logic behind this. I think the logic is "getting perfection". It means being a good person with nice morality, generosity, and etc. Due to my history studies, I know that there were some person in the world who were perfect human. So I decided to more investigate their biography to make myself like them.
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Thanks a lot dears, I am sure your points helped me.
I will try to be better each day :)
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Thinking about afterlife
Today I was booked up. my essay writing, homework, and etc. during my activities I thought about the afterlife! what is it? is it true or not? I thought about some quotes from celebrities that I have studied before. Eventually, I thought that in about the next 70 years, all of the people in the world will change and new people will start life! And this circle of life has existed for millions years!!Therefore, there is a strong logic behind this. I think the logic is "getting perfection". It means being a good person with nice morality, generosity, and etc. Due to my history studies, I know that there were some people in the world who were perfect humans. So I decided to more investigate their biographies more to make myself like them.
I'm not exactly sure what you meant by the part that I highlighted in green, but good work!
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Thinking about the afterlife
Today I was booked up with my essay writing, home works, and etc. During my activities I thought about the afterlife! What is it? Is it true or not? I thought about some quotes from celebrities that I had studied before. Eventually, I thought that until about the next 70 years, all of the people in the world would be changed and new people will continue life! And this life's circle continues for millions of years!!Therefore, there is a strong logic behind this. I think the logic is "getting to perfection". It means being a good person with a nice morality, generosity, and etc. Because of my history studies, I know that there were some people in the world who were perfect humans. So I decided to more investigate their biographies more, and to make myself like them.
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Thinking about the afterlife
Today I was booked up really busy with my essay writing and homework etc. During my activities I thought about the afterlife! What is it? Is it true or not? I thought about some quotes from celebrities that I have studied before. Eventually, I thought that till about in the next 70 years, all the people in the world would be will change and new people will continue life! And this life's circle there is has been here for millions years!!Therefore, There is a strong logic behind this. I think the logic is "getting perfection". It means being a good person with nice morality, generosity, and etc. Due to my history studies, I know that there were some person people in the world who were perfect human. So I decided to more investigate their biographies to make myself more like them.
"etc." is a phrase from Latin, et cetera, which literally means "and the rest." et = and, so you don't put "and" before "etc."
I had no trouble understanding your intended meaning, so keep up the good work! Watch your future tense and check your plurals.
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