My night work in the hospital
Tonigt I was very tired,beacause I just slept for 2.5 hours.There are too many patients.We had to test their temperature,blood pressure,blood sugur and recorded them.there were only 3 nurses in the night.We had a rest untile 8 am,but now i don't want go to sleep.I need to summarize the knowledge my teacher teached me .I think I got a lot of new knowledge tonight.
今晚我非常累因为我只睡了2.5个小时，我们病区有太多病人了。我们不得不量他们的体温，血压和血糖然后再把他们记录下来。晚上只有3个护士。我们一直到早上8点才能休息，现在我也不想睡觉，我需要总结一下老师交给我的知识点，我认为今晚我学到了很多东西。
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My night work in the hospital
Tonigt I was very tired,beacause I just slept for 2.5 hours.There are too many patients.We had to test their temperature,blood pressure,blood sugur and recorded them.there were only 3 nurses in the night.We had a rest untile 8 am,but now i don't want go to sleep.I need to summarize the knowledge my teacher teached me .I think I got a lot of new knowledge tonight.今晚我非常累因为我只睡了2.5个小时，我们病区有太多病人了。我们不得不量他们的体温，血压和血糖然后再把他们记录下来。晚上只有3个护士。我们一直到早上8点才能休息，现在我也不想睡觉，我需要总结一下老师交给我的知识点，我认为今晚我学到了很多东西。
My night at work in the hospital
Tonight I am very tired, because last night, I slept for just two and a half hours. There are too many patients. The other nurses and I had to take their temperature, check their blood pressure and blood sugar and record their vital signs. There were only three nurses on the night shift
We had a rest until 8:00 a.m., but now I don't want to sleep. I must summarize the skills my teacher taught me. I think I learned a lot of new skills tonight.
The tenses must be consistent -- Tonight is present tense, so it should read "I am." Last night is past tense, so it should read "I slept." Numbers under 10 should be written and times should always use the numerals.
Overall it is fair. Good practice, I am sorry you have to work so hard, if this really is a report of what happened during your night at work. Nurses are special people!
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My night work in the hospital
Tonigt Tonight, I was very tired, beacause because I just slept for 2.5 hours.There are too many patients. We had to test their temperature, blood pressure, blood sugur sugar and recorded them. there There were only 3 nurses in during the night. We had a rest break untile 8 am, but now i I don't want go to sleep. I need to summarize the knowledge my teacher teached taught me. I think I got received a lot of new knowledge tonight.今晚我非常累因为我只睡了2.5个小时，我们病区有太多病人了。我们不得不量他们的体温，血压和血糖然后再把他们记录下来。晚上只有3个护士。我们一直到早上8点才能休息，现在我也不想睡觉，我需要总结一下老师交给我的知识点，我认为今晚我学到了很多东西。
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