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Self-Confidence Is Indispensable As can be seen, obviously, There're two soccer players making the game reach its climax. In the attacker's mind, the goalkeeper is imaged incredibly huge, while the goalkeeper envinsions himself a tiny person in front of a relatively enormous goal. Both of them do not believe they can succeed. A generally phenomenon is feflected by the brief cartoon above, revealing that some people usually lose their confidence, especially when doing radical challenges. They can't help drawing a picture of assumptive consequences, which are totally worse than the real situation. Lack of confidence can easily break one't willpower to succeed. In contast, unshakable self-confidence brings a ladder to truimph. A number of instances can be used to exemplify my viewpoint. First of all, despite the fierce competition, students believing in themselves often excel in exams. Furthermore, plenty of famous athletes wasn't stopped by their shorts figures, becoming legends in The Olympic Games.

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Self-Confidence Is Indispensable

As can be seen, obviously, there are two soccer players making the game reach its climax. In the attacker's mind, the goalkeeper is imaged incredibly huge, while the goalkeeper envisions himself a tiny person in front of a relatively enormous goal. Both of them do not believe they can succeed.
A general phenomenon is reflected by the brief cartoon above, revealing that some people usually lose their confidence, especially when actively participating to radical challenges. They can't help drawing an imaginative picture of assumed reality, which are totally worse than the real situation. Lack of confidence can easily break one's willpower to succeed. In contrast, unshakable self-confidence brings a ladder to triumph.
A number of instances can be used to exemplify my viewpoint. First of all, despite the fierce competition, students believing in themselves often excel in exams. Furthermore, plenty of famous athletes were not stopped by their shorts figures, becoming legends in The Olympic Games, this is all due to different mental perspectives.

( Just a few changes i would advise based of grammar corrections to spelling and other, you don't have to use them if you don't like the way it sounds) p.s I love your writing style its absolutely fantastic, much better than 90% English native speaker's English.

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“reflected” I've found it myself

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