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Topic exam 27 This is a part of a letter you receive from an Australian friend: "It´s so hot here! What`s the weather like in your country at the moment? What outdoor activities are you able to do at this time of year?" Tell me about it. Write in 100 words Answer: Dear friend Thanks for your letter you and I hope that temperatures can reduce soon! In my country we are in summer. I lived in the south east of Spain so the temperatures here are so hot too. The most part of the days the temperatures don´t fall of 30 degrees. Despite these temperatures there are some days that we have a summer storm! For this reason I usually practice water activities in summer like swimming o sailing so the next week I will travel to Ibiza beach. Do you know? I hope you will be happy! Write soon J.Carlos Note: When I write "For this reason" it,s sound so much formal?

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thanks so much for your advice! You have a high level of spanish too! If you have any doubt of spanish please tell me! :)
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hola Jose, tu ingles esta a un nevel alto y solo hay unas cosas pequenas que corregir aqui. Suena mas natural decir "I hope that the temperatures over there will drop soon", reduce es un poco formal y no suena perfecto aqui. la cuarta frase se podria escribir "during the day, the temperatures don't usually fall below 30 degrees". of no es la palabra corecta aqui, of segnifica "de" en espanol y "off" es apagado! has usado o en vez de or. seria major decir I will go to the beach in Ibiza y do you know it? nosotros decimos "lo conoces?" en ingles tienes que usar it al final de la frase porge si no seria "conoces?". si tienes alguna duda o pregunta dimelo! espero que esto te haya ayudado y perdoname porque a veces no escribe muy bien en espanol! James.

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