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Chinese culture:the Middle-Autumn Festival The Middle-Autumn Festival is on 15th August the traditional chinese calendar and this year is on 15th Septemper the solar calendar.We have mooncakes and dinner with relatives togerther.The moon is the most round and brightest on that day.The Middle-Autumn Festival has been 1500years history.Ancient chinese sacrificed to the moon and they also had mooncakes and drunk sweet-scented osmanthus wine.Because the transportation was undeveloped,ancient chinese could not be with family numbers ,so they missed hometown very much on tha day.Though they could not be together but could preciate the same moon,then a great deal of beutiful poetry about the moon had been handed down .Most of the poetry expressed the sense of missing hometown and family.

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Chinese Culture: The Middle-Autumn Festival

The Middle-Autumn Festival is on August 15th of the traditional Chinese calendar and this year is on September 15th of the solar calendar this year. We have mooncakes and dinner with relatives togerther. The moon is the roundest and brightest on that day. The Middle-Autumn Festival has existed for 1,500 years. The ancient Chinese sacrificed to the moon and they also had mooncakes and drank sweet-scented osmanthus wine. Because the transportation was undeveloped, ancient Chinese could not be with family numbers, so they missed their hometowns very much on that day. Although they could not be together, they but could appreciate the same moon. Then a great deal of beautiful poetry about the moon was handed down. Most of the poetry expressed the sense of missing hometown and family.


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Nice work! Keep writing and I hope to make it to this festival someday. : )


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