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Crime I believe that our world is a big place of joy, happiness and miracles. Every given day you fell a big palette of emotions. It is your choice what to do here. To give light and kindness or to be cruel and sadistic. I want to talk about crime in general. There are two tipes of crime: felony and misdemeanour. Felony is a serious crime, and misdemeanour is less serious. We see it everyday. On TV news, on the streets, on newspapers, everywhere! Only because I hate these themes I dropped to read newspapers and watch TV. Just notice the titles of reports and arcles! "Armed robberies came into the bank and took hostages"; "The victum was abducted by serial murderer"; "Domestic violence is increasing, why do people keep silence?" ; "It was not an incident, it was an arson" and etc. What can I say about street life? Girls can't go home from work alone, without scaring an assault or murglers. People more and more become interested in saving their property. There are many events of burglary and theft in our days. What else are there on our streets? Drug trafficking, drunk driving, speeding, vandalism, shop lifting, terrorism....I can go on and on. People commit a crime even at work(white collar crime or fraud), crossing borderlines(smuggling) even in the air(hijacking) But what about punishment? Where the justice is? Look, for haunting out the season the punishment is a fine, for speeding or wrong parking is traffic ticket, for drunk driving - license suspension, for child abuse a criminal can be sentensed to 3-7 years in jail. For attempted murder about 10-15 years. For torture more than 17 years... There are also a lot of various kind of penalty: house arrest, community service, but the capital punishment is all life in jail or death... Early in the morning i drink my tasty coffee with my family, we know that the day will be good by all means. But when the silence come, i think "Dear God, thank you for my calm life, good neighbours and my relatives are in save, bring the same in other lives" Because I can't believe that someone in this wonderful world is suffering and asking for help....Thank you.

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Crime

I believe that our world is a big place of joy, happiness and miracles. Every given day you fell feel  (you could also say: Every given day you "have") a big palette of emotions. It is your choice what to do here. To give light and kindness or to be cruel and sadistic. I want to talk about crime in general.
There are two tipes  types of crime: felony and misdemeanour misdemeanor. A Felony is a serious crime, and misdemeanor is less serious. We see it everyday  on TV news, on the streets, on in newspapers, everywhere! (The previous sentences had to be combined or the second sentence would be "a fragment")Only Because I hate these themes I dropped to stopped reading newspapers and watching TV. Just Notice the titles of reports and arcles!articles! "Armed robberies robbers came into the bank and took hostages"; "The victum victim was abducted by a serial murderer"; "Domestic violence is increasing, why do people keep silence silent?" ; "It was not an incident, it was an arson" and etc. (You cannot leave etc.. as the end of a sentence.) What can I say about street life? Girls can't go home from work alone, without scaringfearing an assault or murglers muggers. People more and more are become becoming more and more interested in saving their property. There are many events of burglary and theft in our days. What else are is there on our streets? Drug trafficking, drunk driving, speeding, vandalism, shop lifting, terrorism....I can go on and on.(The previous sentence is a fragment). People commit a crime even at work(white collar crime or fraud), crossing borderlines(smuggling) even in the air(hijacking). But what about punishment? Where is the justice is? 

Look, for haunting hunting out the of season the punishment is a fine. For speeding or wrong parking -- is  a traffic ticket. For drunk driving - license suspension, for child abuse a criminal can be sentenced to 3-7 years in jail. For attempted murder about 10-15 years. For torture more than 17 years... There are also a lot of various different kinds of penalties: house arrest, community service; but the capital punishment is all life in jail prison or death...(jail and prison are slightly different)

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