The reaction to reading a book
Today I finished reading an interesting story named Who Moved My Cheese?.It's a short story,I really enjoyed it,though.
This story teachd me how to face the changes in my life.As we all know,the only constant is changes in the world.And if we met some changes which totally change our lives,we may feel upset or shocked,just like the plot .And the reaction of the changes determine who we are.Some people they may accept it easily and go with the flow,others may think it is unacceptable.
Actually,from my point of view,the reason why they can not accept the change is they do not have the courage to adjust themselves.They do not dare to leave the comfort zone and take an adventure.The fears keep them where they are.In the meantime,they will suffer from the effect of doing nothing.
Life moves on,and so should we——This is what I learned from this book.So, when we face the changes,we just need to gather our courages and ROCK ON!
This is my second time writing an article on italki,I am looking forward to receive your corrections or comments.Thanks,everyone!
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The reaction to reading a book
Today I finished reading an interesting story named Who Moved My Cheese?.It's a short story,. I really enjoyed it, though.This story teachd taught me how to face the changes in my life. As we all know, the only constant is changes in the world in the world is change.And if If we met some face/encounter changes which totally change our lives, we may feel upset or shocked. ,just like the plot .And the Our reaction of to the changes determine who we are.Some people they may accept it them easily and go with the flow, others may think it is unacceptable.
Actually, from my point of view, the reason why they can not accept the change is that they do not have the courage to adjust themselves.They do not dare to leave the comfort zone and take an adventure.The Their fears keep them where they are. In the meantime, they will suffer from the effect of doing nothing.
Life moves on, and so should we.——This is what I learned from this book. So, when we face the changes, we just need to gather our courages and ROCK ON!
This is my second time writing an article on italki, andI am looking forward to receive receiving your corrections or comments.Thanks, everyone!
This was really good, well done! Remember that if you use a comma you still need to put a space between the comma and the next word. Courages is not a word, courage is always used even if it feels like you are referring to a plural. Good job though, very good for your second try! Curtis :)
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