The different events in our lives
I think, we draw some events in our lives by ourselves, even if we don't think about it. Everything, what happens to us, doesn't happen accidentally, it happens for a some reason. I have noticed, that I read some things in books, or magazines, or Internet at least, and then I meet several people, and they sincerely want and try to tell me something really new, but these things are the same. They even say the same phrases. It's fantastic. I regard this as a sign from above. And I try to listen and to understand why I need this information, why it came to me at this time. Have you ever felt something like that?
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The different events in our lives
I think, we draw some events in our lives by ourselves, even if we don't think about it. Everything, what that happens to us, doesn't happen accidentally,. iIt happens for a some reason. I have noticed, that I read some things in books, or magazines, or the Internet at least, and then I meet several people, and they sincerely want and try to tell me something really new, but these things are the same.** They even say the same phrases. It's fantastic. I regard this as a sign from above. And I try to listen and to understand why I need this information, why it came to me at this time. Have you ever felt something like that?**"try to tell me... are the same." This is a bit confusing. I understand that people want to tell you something that they think is new or that truly is new, but that new thing is the same thing you just read. Is that what you mean? I would try to rephrase. One way to rewrite something in order to make it clearer is to say it out loud. Explain it to someone, and they way they understand easiest might be a good way to write it down.
Check your rules on comma usage.
It is also considered good style by some never to begin a written sentence with "and" or "but", although it is a debated topic ;)
I hope this was helpful!
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Hi Elina, the first thing that strikes me about the text is your frequent use of commas, which I understand is quite typical for Russians. We use commas differently in English, and in certain cases you must not use them at all - for example, between a verb and its object.
I've removed a lot of the commas (seriously, you don't need them at all) and adjusted a few phrases so it sounds natural and clear. Feel free to question any corrections I've made.
The different events in our lives
I think, we draw certain events in our lives to ourselves, even if we don't think about it. Everything, that happens to us, doesn't happen accidentally; it happens for a some reason. I have noticed, that I read some things in books, or magazines, or even on the internet, and then I meet several people, and they who sincerely want to try to tell me something really new, but these things are what they say is the same as what I've read. They even say the exact same phrases. It's fantastic! I'm sure this is a sign from above, so I try to listen and to understand why I need this information, and why it has come to me at this time. Have you ever felt something like that?0
The different events in our lives
I think, we draw some experiences in our lives from ourselves, even if we don't think about it. Everything, that happens to us, doesn't happen accidentally, it happens for a reason. I have noticed, that I read some things in books, or magazines, or Internet at least, and then I meet several people, and they sincerely want and try to tell me something really new, but these things are the same. They even say the same phrases. It's fantastic. I regard this as a sign from above. And I try to listen and to understand why I need this information, why it came to me at this time. Have you ever felt something like that?0
Thank :) I try to memorize any unfamiliar words that I see. However I suspect that you little overestimate my opportunities ;}
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Oh, you're welcome)))) I found some unknown words for me in your note entries too, though I've been learning English since I was 5 years old o_O So go on! You're very good at learning English, I think
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