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The best princess of Disney I think that the best princess of Disney is Mulán. She is so brave and have a bigger heart. The history of Mulán capture my attention because is so different. The plot is set in the dynasty "Han". She was the only daugther of "Fa Zhou". As her father is so old, so she decides to make pass for a man to fight against the invasion of "hunos". In this adventure she is company for a little dragon called "Mushu", a lucky cricket and the warriors "Yao, Ling and Chien-Po".

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The best Disney princess

I think that the best princess of Disney princess is Mulán. She is so brave and have a bigger has a big heart. The history of Mulán captures my attention because it is so different. The plot is set in the dynasty "Han" Han Dynasty. She was the only daugther daughter of "Fa Zhou" Fa Zhou. As her father is so old Her father is so old, so she decides to make pass for disguise herself as a man to fight against the invasion of "hunos" The Huns. In this adventure, she is company for accompanied by a little dragon called "Mushu" Mushu, a lucky cricket, and the warriors "Yao, Ling and Chien-Po" Yao, Ling and Chien Po.

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The best princess of Disney

I think that the best princess of Disney is Mulán. She is so brave and have a bigger heart. The history of Mulán capture my attention because is so different. The plot is set in the dynasty "Han". She was the only daugther of "Fa Zhou". As her father is so old, so she decides to make pass for a man to fight against the invasion of "hunos". In this adventure she is company for a little dragon called "Mushu", a lucky cricket and the warriors "Yao, Ling and Chien-Po".


Have must change to has

Capture must change to captures, or captured

To make a pass at is correct

Th First letters of the names must be capital

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The best Disney princess

I think that the best princess of Disney is Mulán. She is so brave and have a bigger heart. The history of Mulán capture my attention because is so different. The plot is set in the dynasty "Han". She was the only daugther of "Fa Zhou". As her father is so old, so she decides to make pass for a man to fight against the invasion of "hunos". In this adventure she is company for a little dragon called "Mushu", a lucky cricket and the warriors "Yao, Ling and Chien-Po".

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