Olympic Games
This is my first entry in this page, although I've helped some people with their articles, but as said, it's the first time that I write here.
These Olympic Games were a bit different for me during the weeks and days before the begining, because I didn't pay attention to them, it was like something that was not as important as previous games... and I didn't know why. It could be because of the hours, so that in Spain you needed to stay awake till 5 in the morning for watching some exercises, or because this year I didn't have many hopes with our athletes... but in the end, there I was in front of my tv watching as many competitions as I could. And I specially liked watching basketball, amazing the Spanish team (of course, USA team was better, but we knew that).
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Olympic Games
This is my first entry inThese Olympic Games were a bit different for me.
This was my first write article here. Thanks
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[1] I would say it in the plural, because the notebook is a collection of pages
[2] "that" is not required here, although it is not wrong.
[3] Your sentence is not really wrong, but this is not how people would say it.
[4] Do you know now? If you do, it is OK. If not, then use the present.
[5] You don't count your "hopes", so use "much" instead.
[6] If you say "... was amazing..." you are referring to the performance during the Games. If you say "... is amazing...", you are implying they are always like so.
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Olympic Games
This is my first entry on this page. In the past, I have helped some people with their articles, but this is the first time that I have write something here.These Olympic Games were a bit different for me. During the weeks and days leading up to the games, I didn't pay much attention to them, because it was not really that important like previous games.
I don't know why. It could be because of the time difference, between Spain and Brazil, you needed to stay awake at 5 am in the morning to watch some events, or because this year I didn't have much hope with our athletes. In the end, there I was, in front of the television, watching as many competitions as I could. I specially liked watching basketball. The Spanish Team was amazing. (of course, the USA team was better, but we knew that).
This was my first write article here. Thanks
1
Olympic Games
This is my first entry in this page, although I've helped some people with their articles, but as I said, it's the first time that I write here.These Olympic Games were a bit different for me during the weeks and days before the begining, because I didn't pay attention to them, it was like something that was not as important as previous games... and I didn't know why. It could be because of the hours time, so that in Spain you needed to stay awake till 5 in the morning for watching some exercises, or because this year I didn't have many much hopes with on our athletes... but in the end, there I was in front of my tv watching as many competitions as I could. And I especially liked watching basketball, I was amazed by the Spanish team (of course, the USA team was better, but we knew that).
This was my first writing article here. Thanks.
Oh man, time difference between China and Brazil is nearly 12 hours. So who's more mad about the time?
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