My awesome experience.
It's still so excited when I write this special experience down~
Yes,I dropped down from 1,5000 feets high, and flew on the NZ sky for 45 seconds.
Most of my friends asked me that~
"How was the feeling when you jumped?"
"Are you lost your mind? Did you afriad that time? "
"Do you want go to skydive again? maybe you can try different country!"
"Wow, such a brave girl so proud of you!"
and so on... ...
Yes, of course I'm afraid of jumped down with a stranger I just meet 10 minutes , but why?
Why I know it's dangerous,I still did it?
Because I said this to myself "You know how much you paid for your dream and finally you got this chance to jump, it's your time to challange your limit, go! girl, believe you can do it, and after this you will know that you are more brave than what you think"
Aww~~~~
1.(before you jump)all the stuffs in my mind are "regret...afraid...help~"
2.(when you jump)I can't breath,maybe I'm dying...
3.(after you jump)OMG~so funny! come on,try again!!!
Be brave,don't say I can't before you try, and just do it,to find a smart way to fix the problem,challenge your limit you will find you are unlimited,"It's not you are not good enough ,it's you will getting better .God loves you and the holy spirit will help you and guide you"
So~
Keep your smile, girl~
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My awesome experience.
It's still so exciting / I'm still so excited when I write this special experience down~Yes, I dropped down from 1,5000 feet high, and flew on the NZ sky for 45 seconds.
Most of my friends asked me that~
"How did it feel when you jumped?"
"Have you lost your mind? Were you afraid that time? "
"Do you want go skydiving again? Maybe you can try a different country!"
"Wow, such a brave girl! So proud of you!"
and so on... ...
Yes, of course I'm afraid of jumping down with a stranger I just meet 10 minutes ago, but why?
Why is it that I knew it was dangerous, but I still did it?
Because I said this to myself: "You know how much you paid for your dream, and finally you got this chance to jump. It's your time to challange your limit! Go! Girl, believe you can do it, and after this, you will know that you are braver than what you thought."
Aww~~~~
1.(before I jumped) all the stuff in my mind were "regret...afraid...help~"
2.(when I jumped) I can't breath. Maybe I'm dying...
3.(after I jumped) OMG~so fun! come on, try again!!!
I would do more and try to explain more of the mistakes in detail, but I don't have the space. Maybe we can talk about it some in our meeting tomorrow. :) As always, there is a key/legend in my comment.
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My awesome experience.
It's still so exciting when I write this special experience down.Yes,I dropped down from 15,000 feets high, and flew over NZ skies for 45 seconds.
Most of my friends asked me:
"How did you feel when you jumped?"
"Have you lost your mind? Were you afraid that time? "
"Do you want go to skydiving again? maybe you can try it in another country!"
"Wow, such a brave girl so proud of you!"
and so on... ...
Yes, of course I was afraid of jumping down with a stranger I just met 10 minutes earlie , but why?
Because I knew it was dangerous, but I still did it?
Because I said this to myself "You know how much you paid for your dream and finally you got this chance to jump. Now it's your time to challenge your limits, you go girl! Believe you can do it, and after that you will know that you are more braver than what you think"
Aww,
1.(Before I jumped)all that was in my mind were, regret, afraid and in need of help.
2.(When I jumped)I couldn't breath, maybe I was dying.
3.(After I jumped)I was so excited and said OMG that was so fun, come on lets try it again!!!
Be brave,don't say you can't do it before you try and just do it to find a smart way to fix the problem. Challenge your limits and you will find out that you can do the impossible you thought you could've never done. It's not that you are not good enough ,it's just that you are getting better .God loves you and the Holy Spirit will help you and guide you"
So, Keep smiling girl.
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@Leigh Mumford
yes!!!!!!!!ever~~~~
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I had my first jump last October. It was the most awesome experience of my life.
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and here is my video~
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVSem4SjMK4
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