carven's notebook 4/11
It was rain this morning,it made the road so wet.When I drived to work,the car can not brake very well.So I drived very carfully and slowly.On the way to company,I saw twice traffic accident.They are very scared!
Since I was arrived company safed,but the time was later.~~ :(
It cause a amercement for me,but I am not unhappy.
At least,I am better than the guys who in the traffic accident.I am lucky than them.
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carven's notebook 4/11
It was rainy this morning. It made the road so wet .When I drove to work,the car didIt cause a amercement for me,but I was
At least,I am better than the guys who got in the traffic accident.I am luckier than them.
but I am not unhappy.
You can't write double negatives in English.
EX：不对：我不觉得不好了。
对： 我觉得不好了。
If it is past tence than the word is drove. You don't say "When I drive to work."
You can say "I drive to work."
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Yea.. the safety have priority over works. The accident is scary.
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