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I like playing basketball. And it inspired me. I'm a software developer. And I always have to stay in the front of computer. But I am a active boy. I like basketball and building body. I play it three or four times every week. My level of basketball isn't very good. LOL~ Why do I like it? The reason is that I can forget my pressure and annoyance when I play it. I feel so cool. It makes me get more and more like-minded friends. My favourite NBA stars are Jordan, Iverson, Kobe and James. I think they are very great. And their spirit inspired me and let me better. One of my dream is that I could see them and have a warm hug with them one day. So I want to learn English with you, you and you. I'm so glad to meet you here. Hope we can be good friends. Do you see? ^_^

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I like playing basketball. And it inspired inspires me.

I'm a software developer. And I always have to stay sit in the front of the computer. But I am a an active boy. I like basketball and building body body building. I play it three or four times every week. My level of basketball isn't very good. LOL~ Why do I like it? The reason is that I can forget my pressure and annoyance when I play it. I feel feels so cool. It makes me get more and more like-minded friends. My favourite NBA stars are Jordan, Iverson, Kobe and James. I think they are very great good. And their spirit inspired me and let me get better. One of my dream dreams is that I could see meet them and have a warm hug with them one day. So I want to learn English with you. you and you. I'm so glad to meet you here. I hope Hope we can be good friends. Do you see think? ^_^

Great article Alex and not many mistakes - keep it up! :) 

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