gook bye to tobacco GOOD BYE TO TOBACCO Day in day out, many smokers try to give up their bad habit in order to achieve the great benefits that the lack of it gives. Certainly, only very few people re

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Lorena

gook bye to tobacco GOOD BYE TO TOBACCO Day in day out, many smokers try to give up their bad habit in order to achieve the great benefits that the lack of it gives. Certainly, only very few people reach the goal due to the difficulties which are associated with it. Firstly, the easiest thing that smokers should try is to use their will-power, otherwise, they would need from external assistance what means to spend money and time in the purpose of giving up smoking. As a consequence, they will improve steeply not only their breath capability but also their quality of life. In addition to the benefits, it is important to know the drawbacks related to giving up smoking in a short period of time. As soon as people start quitting the vice, they suffer from nervousness and anxiety. Consequently, they have to be patient and try to relax with the aim of avoiding as much as possible these problems which last few weeks. By and large, it is known that smoking is damaging the health and, as a result, society should be aware of the consequences of tobacco has and the state should provide information and some help to those who have decided to quit it. To conclude, smokers have to think seriously about the problem they have since their health and pocket is reducing sharply and they are very difficult to recover shortly. Thanks for corrections

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gook bye to tobacco

GOOD BYE TO TOBACCO
Day in and day out, many smokers try to give up their bad habit. They do so in order to achieve the great benefits that not smoking brings the lack of it gives. Certainly, However, only very few people reach the goal due to the difficulties which are associated with it.
Firstly, the easiest thing that smokers should try is to use their will-power. otherwise, they would will need from to have some external assistance, what which means to spend spending money and time in the purpose of giving to give up smoking. As a consequence, Not only will they will greatly improve steeply not only their ability to breath, capability but also their quality of life.
In addition to these benefits, it is important to know understand the drawbacks related to giving up smoking in a short period of time. As soon as people start quitting the vice, they suffer from nervousness and anxiety. Consequently, they have to be patient and try to relax. These problems, which last for a few weeks, must be avoided as much as possible. with the aim of avoiding as much as possible these problems which last few weeks.
By and large, it is known that smoking is damaging the one's health. and, as a result, Society should be aware of the consequences of that smoking tobacco has and the state should provide information and some help to those who have decided are trying to quit it.
To conclude, In conclusion, smokers have to must think seriously about the problem they have since because their health and pocketbooks is reducing sharply are sharply reduced. and they are very difficult to recover shortly.

Your meaning is clear. For the most part, any English-speaking person would be able to understand what you have written.

In written Spanish, the sentences tend to be quite formal and the sentences to be, for the most part, very complex. With English writing, it is quite different. The sentences tend to be much shorter and, in general, to be more succinct (sucinto), much narrower in scope (de alcance m'as limitado). [NOTE: I used Goggle to translate the Spanish I just used.]

I tried to create shorter sentences for you. Hope it helps.

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