I went to Nijima(Moyai)
I went to Nijima for my summer vacation.
Nijima is island contained one of Tokyo' s islands.
I had ride boat for 7 hour.
When I arrived Nijima, there Stone statue "Moyai" .
Moyai is like a Easter Island 's Moai statue.
Nijima favorite Coga stone.
Coga stone is rare Stone borned Volcanic activity.
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I went to Nijima
I went to Nijima for my summer vacation.Nijima is island contained one of Tokyo' s islands.
I had rode on the boat for 7 hours.*
When I arrived in Nijima, [there was/I saw] the Stone statue "Moyai".**
Moyai is like a the Easter Island's Moai statue.
Nijima's favorite stone is the Koga stone.***
The Koga stone is a rare stone borned formed by Volcanic activity.
*A more natural way to say this is 'the boat ride was seven hours long.'
**if there were more than one Moyai, the sentence would be '...i saw the stone statues called 'Moyai.' If not, this sentence is fine.
***You need to say what is favoured.
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