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My Pet I have a pet. He is very smart. Is a Himalayan Persian, with red points and blue eyes. Although he is a kitty, he is pretty independent. Every day he wakes me up at 5:30 am.

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My Pet

I have a pet. He is very smart. Is a Himalayan Persian, with red points and blue eyes.
Although he is a kitty, he is pretty independent. Every day he wakes me up at 5:30 am.


My Pet

I have a pet. He is very smart. He is a Himalayan Persian, with red spots and blue eyes. 
Although he is a kitty, he is pretty independent. Everyday he wakes me up at 5:30 am.

Good, only 3 mistakes
1) You forgot the subject on the sentence "HE" IS A...
2) Spots
3) Everyday, you write it in one word

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My Pet

I have a pet. He is very smart. He is a Himalayan Persian, with red spots and blue eyes.
Although he is a kitty, he is pretty independent. Every day he wakes me up at 5:30 am.


sounds great! I love cats :) 

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My Pet

I have a pet. It's a Himalayan Persian cat with red points(?) and blue eyes.
Although he is a kitty, he is pretty independent and smart. Every day he wakes me up at 5:30 am. 


Good job, Alan. I clumped the two qualities of the cat together so that they are not fragmented. 

I am not sure what you meant by red points.....did you mean red spots on the body?

Do you know for sure that it's a male cat? Otherwise you can use 'it' to describe it. 

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