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The 2016 Olympic Games are developing now. On the whole I'm sorry for humble Brazilian people. People feel noblest feelings and pride if a big event is made in their country. An instance of that is loads of volunteers give their best. Mass media, olympic committees, politicians and so on focus on the event taking advantage for their interests. But…,actually, what happen ?
These big events cost an enormous amount of money. The cost is paid by population. Doesn't matter what is the way. Actually there are many ways.
A big event is like a fertilized soil where grow corruption. This stands firmer and it’ll survive all winds long time since the event has finished.
On the other hand I admit that a big event generates lots of money. However few hands get money from the event. Some of them make a killing, although humble people won’t get any coin. Nevertheless they will pay country debts during decades meanwhile tax haven countries are probabily collecting capitals.
As a result of a big event, many countries became poorer than before with hard and longer economic crashes losing millions of jobs. There are some examples.
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Another point of view
The 2016 Olympic Games are developing now going on now. On the whole, I'm sorry I feel sorry for the humble Brazilian people. People feel the noblest feelings and of pride if a big event is made takes place in their country (Another way you could say this is, "...when their country is host to a big event.") An instance example of that is loads of volunteers give their best. Mass media, olympic committees, politicians and so on focus on the event taking advantage on taking advantage of the event for their own interests. But... actually, what happens ?These big events cost an enormous amount of money. The cost is paid by the population. It doesn't matter what is the way how. Actually, there are many ways.
A big event is like a fertilized soil where grow corruption corruption grows. This stands firmer, and it’ll survive all winds a long time since after the event has finished. ("survive all winds" is not an expression that I'm familiar with in English. I would reword this sentence like this, "This stands stronger and will remain prevalent a long time after the event has finished.")
On the other hand, I admit that a big event generates lots of money. However, few hands get money from the event. Some of them the elites will make a killing, although while humble people won’t get any coin make a cent. (You could also say, "won't make a penny" or "won't make a dime.") Nevertheless, they will pay the country's debts during for decades meanwhile tax haven countries are probabily probably collecting capitals.
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Another point of view
The 2016 Olympic Games are developing/occurring/happening now. On the whole I'm sorry for the poor Brazilian people. People feel noblest feelings and pride if a big event is held in their country. An example of that is that loads of volunteers give their best. Mass media, olympic committees, politicians and so on focus on the event taking advantage for their interests. But…,actually, what happens ?These big events cost an enormous amount of money. The cost is paid by population/the people/the public. Doesn't matter how they will pay for it. Actually there are many ways.
A big event is like a fertilized soil where corruption grows. This stands firmer and it’ll survive all winds long time since the event has finished. ??
On the other hand I admit that a big event generates lots of money. However few hands get money from the event. Some of them make a killing, although humble people won’t get any coin. Nevertheless they will pay for debts/for the expenses for decades meanwhile tax haven countries are probably collecting much profit.
As a result of a big event, many countries became poorer than before with hard and longer economic crashes losing millions of jobs. There are some examples.
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