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My name is Angela Porto and I'm 21 years old. I live in Santa Barbara neighborhood. and I would like to work with cage group learning center, and I am applying apply for an English teaching position at Cage Group Learning Center. I lived in Toronto for three years and I have been working as an English teacher in Colombia working for EnglishForever corporation as well as different various other private schools. In that job, I have had the opportunity to work with a different wide range of people students from kindergarten to practically adult working professionals others. I'm a very proactive person and love teaching others! My salary expectation is from approximately 800.000 to 1.000.000 plus services.

I would love to discuss this position further and see how I can help your business succeed. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

thank you for your time . Have a good day.

Sincerely,

Angela

Note: in western English-speaking countries you would (almost) never put your salary requirements in an introduction email/letter like this. If it's the norm in Columbia then by all means include it, but you may want to think of establishing the value you bring to the company before providing your salary requirements. It's a general sales rule to never discuss price before you've discussed value (but you also have to do what you're confortable with).