My French friend
I Have a french friend, his name is patrick.
We have known each other about 2 years .How did we meet? One day, i was giong to the park with my babby , we were waiting for the bus at the bus station. Because there are too many people were getting on the bus, it was hard for me to get on the bus with my babby. At this time, patrick helped me . We talked happily ,and then i found he was living near my dapartment. After that, we ofen chat together, we have meal once a month.
Patrik is an oid teacher in Univercity, he teaches french,but he looks youngger than his age. He is tall and very kind, he likes chinese food very much, especially the spicy food.
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My French Friend
I have a french friend, his name is Patrick.We have known each other about 2 years .How did we meet? One day,I was going to the park with my baby , we were waiting for the bus at the bus station. Because there are were too many people were getting on the bus, it was hard for me to get on the bus with my baby. At this time, Patrick helped me . We talked happily ,and thenI found he was living near my apartment (is this what you meant?). After that, we often chat together, and we have meals once a month.
Patrick is an oider teacher in at a university. He teaches French,but he looks younger than his age he is. He is tall and very kind, he likes Chinese food very much, especially the spicy food.
*I would reword one sentence because you mention that he's an older teacher, then that he teaches French, then you go back to saying he looks younger than he is. So I would say "Patrick is a teacher at a university where he teaches French(or "Patrick teaches French at a university). While he is an older teacher, he looks younger than he is (or "he looks young for his age").
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