I will try my best for a nice trip abroad
Let me write my second times in notebook.
Despite I started italki two days ago, I have already contacted some foreign friends on italki. I spent a good time and am so happy because everyone are kind to me and even teach me English. I don't want to waste their helpfulness for me. So, I decide to write their advice on the notebook that I bought today (not in italki).
By the way, I paid about one hundred thousand yen (¥100,000) to the airline company as travel expenses. I must appreciate parents because I'm still a student in university (i.e., I don't work yet).
In order not to waste both advice in English of foreign friends on italki and support of parents, I will try my best!
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New expressions in English for me (e.g., word, phrase, grammar...etc);
(I'm going to write it after the above sentences is corrected)
1. for my second time: 私にとって二回目の
2. foreign friends: 外人の友達
3. everyoneは単数形として扱う
4. be kind to me: 〜は私に対して親切にしてくれる
5. even: さらに
6. teach, taught, taught
7. waste: 無駄にする,浪費する
8. toward me: 私に対して
9. airline company: 航空会社
10. travel expenses: 旅費
11. appreciateの後にtoはいらない
12. In order not to: 〜しないために
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I will try my best for a nice trip abroad
Let me write for my second time_ in notebook.Despite the fact that I started italki two days ago, I have already contacted some foreign friends (you do not need to repeat italki again because it has already been said in the sentence). I spent a good time(this sentence can be said better) and I am so happy because everyone is kind to me and even teach me English. I don't want to waste their helpfulness for me. So, I decide to write their advice in the notebook that I bought today (not in italki).
By the way, I paid about one hundred thousand yen (¥100,000) to the airline company as travel expenses. I must appreciate my parents because I'm still a student in a / at university (i.e., I don't work yet).
In order to not waste both the advice in English of foreign friends on italki and support of parents, I will try my best!
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New expressions in English for me (e.g., word, phrase, grammar...etc);
(I'm going to write it after the above sentences is corrected)
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I will try my best for a nice trip abroad
Let me write for the second time in my notebook.Despite I started italki two days ago, I have already contacted some foreign friends on here. I had a good time and am so happy because everyone is kind to me and even taught me English. I don't want to waste their helpfulness towards me, so I decided to write their advice on the notebook that I bought today (not in italki).
By the way, I paid about one hundred thousand yen (¥100,000) to the airline company as travel expenses. I must appreciate my parents because I'm still a student in university (i.e., I don't work yet).
In order not to waste both the advice in English of foreign friends on italki, and the support of my parents, I will try my best!
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New expressions in English for me (e.g., word, phrase, grammar...etc);
(I'm going to write it after the above sentences is corrected)
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