Cleaning
It was a lovely day today. I should have gone out somewhere, shouldn't I? I ended up staying at home all the day. I'm not at home in the daytime on weekdays, so it doesn't get so messy, but I could see dust in the corner in the end. It's time to clean. I've cleaned the room with a vacuum cleaner for the first time in a while. Some outlets cause a fire alert when I use them for a vacuum cleaner. It's something weird but I must be careful about that. After a few hours, I was done.
My wife and children will come back to America next Saturday though, I hope they'll feel good and relaxed here.
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Cleaning
It was a lovely day today. I should have gone out somewhere, shouldn't I?* I ended up staying at home all the day. I'm not at home in the daytime during the day on weekdays**, so it doesn't get so messy, but I could see dust in the corner in the end. It's time to clean. I've cleaned the room with a vacuum cleaner for the first time in a while. Some outlets cause a fire alert set off the fire alarm when I use them for a vacuum cleaner. It's something weird but I must have to be careful about that. After a few hours, I was done.My wife and children will come be coming back to America next Saturday though, I hope they'll feel good and relaxed here.
* I like the casual, conversational tone. It feels like you are talking directly to me.
** I made the change here because of rhythm, not because it was wrong. (I'm not sure why . . . maybe because "in . . . on" is awkward). Instead of "in the daytime on weekdays" it sounds better to say either "during the day on weekdays" or "in the daytime during the week."
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