Check my TOEFL writing practice please! I will be very grateful
I think that people attend to college for three main reason that are to learn, to prepare for life and for personal overcome.
The principal reason that motivates people to attend to university is to learn a profession that they are passionate and they will dedicate on it their life. In addition, to learn techniques and new knowledge to perform well in the labor market, to be excellent professionals and could live from that activity and profession learned at university in a good economic way. In my case I am studying business administration and I hope to work doing audits for huge enterprises all around the world. So, in my university I am learning about accounting, mathematics, management and many things that I need to know to develop that labor.
Secondly, I believe that being in a university is fundamental for preparing for life and beat their challenges. The people who attended to university also develop soft skills, this let them to be better in their life and work. A university student could learn about leadership, effective communication and teamwork while studying in a graduate or post-graduate course and that knowledge may be difficult to earn without attend to a university. In addition, while I was in college I take advantage of that time to be part of a nonprofit organization that does international exchanges, there I worked in the development of many projects and I learned a lot about project and team management.
Finally, attend to university is a personal overcome and a development of the human kind potential, because all the student will face many challenges on their student life that they have to affront and defeat, many academic or personal problems. At the final of the career many student will fell that they have overcome many situations and have reached many goals. All of these experiences develop the personal and professional abilities.
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Check my TOEFL writing practice please! I will be very grateful
I think that people attend to college for three main reasons: to learn, to prepare for life and for personal overcome development.The principal reason that motivates people to attend to a university is to learn a profession that they are passionate about and they will dedicate on it their life to. In addition, to learn techniques and new knowledge to perform well in the labor market, to be excellent professionals and could to be able to make a good living. from that activity and profession learned at university in a good economic way. In my case I am studying business administration and I hope to work doing audits for huge enterprises all around the world. So, in my university I am learning about accounting, mathematics, management and many things that I need to know to develop that labor career.
Secondly, I believe that being in a university is fundamental for preparing for life and beat their overcoming challenges. The people who attend a university also develop soft skills, this let that enable them to be better in their life and work. A university student could learn about leadership, effective communication, and teamwork, while studying in a graduate or post-graduate course and that knowledge may be difficult to learn without attend going to a university. In addition, while I was in college, I take took advantage of that time to be part of a nonprofit organization that does international exchanges. While there I worked in the development of many projects and I learned a lot about project and team management.
Finally, attending a university is a helpful for personal overcome and a development of the personal human kind potential, because all the students will face many challenges in their student life that they will have to affront confront and defeat, many both academic or and personal problems. At the final end of their career studies many students will feel that they have overcome many situations and have reached many goals. All of these experiences develop their personal and professional abilities.
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Check my TOEFL writing practice please! I will be very grateful
I think that people attend to college for three main reasons: that are to learn, to prepare for life and for personal overcome. growth.The principal reason that motivates people to attend to university is to learn a profession that they are passionate about and they will dedicate on it their life their lives to. In addition, they attend to learn techniques and new knowledge to perform well in the labor market, and to be excellent professionals. With this knowledge they and could earn a lucrative living in that profession live from that activity and profession learned at university in a good economic way. In my case I am studying business administration and I hope to work doing audits for huge enterprises all around the world. So, in my university I am learning about accounting, mathematics, management and many things that I need to know to develop that labor.
Secondly, I believe that being in a university is fundamental for preparing for life and beat their facing [or conquering?] challenges. The people who attended to university also develop soft interpersonal skills, this let which helps them to be do better in their life and work. A university student could learn about leadership, effective communication and teamwork while studying in a graduate or post-graduate course. and that That knowledge may be difficult to earn acquire without attend to having attended a university. In addition, while I was in college I take took advantage of that time to be part of a nonprofit organization that does international exchanges. There I worked in the development of many projects and I learned a lot about project and team management.
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Finally, attend to attending university is a personal overcome accomplishment and helps a the development of the human kind potential, because all Students will face many challenges on in their student life lives that they have to affront confront and defeat, many including academic or and personal problems. At the final end of the academic career many students will fell feel that they have overcome many situations and have reached many goals. All of these experiences develop the personal and professional abilities.
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