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TV - version #2 I decided to rewrite my last homework. It was pitty bacause I felt very tired then. So, relax and just read my georgeous homework PEACE FROM POLAND JessyJames Television – a blessing or a curse? If you think about TV, many ideas can spring to your mind. This modern technology is consisted of commercials, celebrities and TV series and fantastic cinematography productions. It is a big business which has many advantages and disadvantages. I would like to start my essay from describing good faces of TV. People need information. Any important occurrence is delivered by TV and presented in short time. Moreover society needs entertainment. A lot of citizens just want relax in their homes and watch various TV programs. In small flat anybody can taste a little adventure by TV led. Concerning essay topic, we can note one significant thing. If we have enough money, we can advertise our products. Block of advertisements can be watched by thousands or even millions of potential clients. “Advertising drives trade” as many say. Moving forward, I would like to present a few dark sides of TV. First of all, we must say that TV manipulates people (especially the youth). To validate my thesis I will use example. Commercial presents expensive cars and at the same time we can see beautiful women. Subconsciously man thing “If I had this car I would be able to pick up nice girl”. For me, it is sales pitch. 165 On the over hand people are becoming “social zombies”. I have figured that people who watch more than 4 hours of TV in a day are more lazy and lamentable. Personally, I think it is because of schemes given by TV series or low intelligent stars. Everybody needs authority. Many times it comes from bad place. In my opinion, people should rather read books or go to the theathres (as like as me). I feel relaxed and happy, and I’m well informed. You can ask me “From where you get information?” and I’ll answer “It is my little secret”.

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