A boy gave a Warcraft ticket to me.It is a real story.Please point out my mistakes .Thank you!
Some months ago.i went to movie theatre with my friends for the initial midnight showing of Warcraft.we wait in line then a boy gave a ticket to me ,i was surprised,i think if he likes me .But i was so sad when he said the reason‘“I order the wrong ticket,i want to give you ."my heart was broken at that moment.
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A boy gave a Warcraft ticket to me.It is a real story.Please point out my mistakes .Thank you!
Some months ago.i went to movie theatre with my friends for the initial midnight showing of Warcraft.we wait in line then a boy gave a ticket to me ,i was surprised,i think if he likes me .But i was so sad when he said the reason‘“I order the wrong ticket,i want to give you ."my heart was broken at that moment.Some months ago, I went to a movie theatre with my friends for the midnight showing of World of Warcraft. We waited in line, when suddenly a boy gave me a ticket; I was surprised. It made me wonder if he liked me. I was sad when I found out the reason he gave me the ticket was because I ordered the wrong one initially. My heart was broken because of that.
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