My day of work.
Everyday, from 7am until 9pm I do my work. I am physiotherapist and I give classes of Pilates. I love what I do. However I am get really tired at the end of the week because of my long journey from monday till friday. Of couse, I take a rest after lunch, because I return to my work at 2pm, besides at 5pm I go to my english classes. Nevertheless, I want to continue to study more and more and become better in English and improve my knowledge in physiotherapy.
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My day of work.
Everyday, from 7am until 9pm I do my work. I am physiotherapist and I give classes of Pilates. I love what I do. However I am get really tired at the end of the week because of my long journey from Monday till Friday. Of course, I take a rest after lunch, because I return to my work at 2pm. Besides at 5pm I go to my English classes. Nevertheless, I want to continue to study more and more and become better in English and improve my knowledge in physiotherapy.Comment: Good work. Your sentence structure is excellent. The corrections are very minor and partly style like breaking up a long sentence. Also, for formal writing time should be 7 a.m. and 5 p.m.
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