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A project description 2 SWITCH OFF is a festival about Darkness located in Milan into the Vittorio Emanuele II Gallery By the duration of a week, this festival will offer a variety of cultural and recreative activities for each event day. During this time, the Vittorio Emanuele II Gallery will turn into an inner space: the entrances and the glass ceiling will be covered with thick curtains for creating darkness inside the Gallery, which is a building originally designed to be an indoor public space, but permeable to light. The darkness will be the location for immersive exhibitions, where visitors are involved into a new environment that shifts their usual perception of space and reality. The project offers a communicating space, which aims to change the common negative idea about darkness.

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A project description 2

SWITCH OFF is a festival about Darkness located in Milan into the Vittorio Emanuele II Gallery
By the duration of a week (during the week), this festival will offer a variety of cultural and recreational activities for each event day (for each day it's on). During this time, the Vittorio Emanuele II Gallery will turn into an inner space: the entrances and the glass ceiling will be covered with thick curtains for creating darkness inside the Gallery, which is a building originally designed to be an indoor public space, but permeable to light.
The darkness will be the location for immersive exhibitions, where visitors are submersed into a new environment that shifts their usual perception of space and reality.
The project offers a communicating space, which aims to change the common negative idea (belief) about darkness.

Optional  = what you wrote was understandable, but the optional phrases are a little more natural 

'submersed' instead of 'involved' = involved sounds right, because the visitors are participating in the new environment. But i think submersed is better because the visitors are being submersed (surrounded by) in darkness.

I hope this helps, if you have any questions, feel free to ask :)

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