Who will be in that paradise?
July is a summer month in my country. It is a really hot month. The temperature is raising every decade. I haven't doubt that the global warming is coming more quickly than scientists predict.
The hot waves repet more times than some decades ago. The temperatures records are constantly beated.
Furthermore, in my gegrafical area, the environment is becoming dry and dry year to year. The average annual rainfall is seriously decresing.
My age is nothing compared to earth timescale, however I can apreciate the global warming clearly. The target of two celsius degree stablished in several environmental summits has already exceeded. I think so.
As well earth poles feel the raising temperature. Doesn't matter if I feel that, but when the polar ice melts in enormous quantities the humanity has a big problem wothout reverse.
Greedy multimillonaires denying the problem and controlling mass media will always be. For them there will always be a paradise in some place.
Who will be in that paradise and what social role will have?
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Who will be in that paradise?
July is a summer month in my country. It is a really hot month. The temperature is rising every decade. I don't doubt that the global warming is coming (more natural would be: approaching/taking effect) more quickly than scientists predict (consider: have predicted).The hot waves now repet (repeat) (consider: occur instead) more times (consider: more frequently) than they did some decades ago. The temperature records are constantly beated being beaten.
Furthermore, in my geographical area, the environment is becoming dry and dry year to year drier and drier every year. The average annual rainfall is seriously decreasing.
My age is nothing compared to earth's timescale (consider: the timescale of the earth), however I can appreciate the fact that global warming is occurring clearly. The target rise of two degrees Celcius established in several environmental summits has already exceeded. At least, I think so.
As well Also, earth's poles feel the rising temperatures. It doesn't matter if I feel that, but when the polar ice melts in enormous quantities the humanity has will have a big problem without that it cannot reverse.
Greedy multimillionaires (consider: multibillionaires) denying the problem and controlling mass media will always continue to exist. For them there will always be a paradise in some place.
[Who will be in that paradise and what social role will have?] Consider: [Who will be in that paradise and what social role will it play?]
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