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My ideas about Pokemon go Hello everybody, It have been so long time no haven't speak English neither write English's article, now I am graduated from the Master of UB, and my new job asked me to have a high level of the English, I'm so nevous. I practiced with my Spanish partner but he has the Spanish tone and many times we don't understand the each other that what we talked. So, it's the time to requierd your English native speakers to help me correct the errors and get the higher level. Now let me talk about the new applicate, the very famous and very popular smart phone game--"pokemon go". Well, first of all, I think the pokemon go helps us to do the exercise in the outdoor and breath the fresh air(now my partner is obsession of this game and always go out to let the pokemon get out of those eggs and find the new pokemons, before that he never got out to do the execise, that's amazing no?) The second place is I think it's a good way to recognise the new place and meet the new people. Sometime the people like to go to some newplace to catch pokemons, like some beach, mountains, rivers, parks. The pokemon go have a gook relationship with the Google map, it let you know some landmarks in somewhere(because that will lead you to get pokeballs, jeje). Sometime the place near to you have gyms, that you can fight to the diferent equipments. The gyms is the placer where the friends make the unit to against the diferent equipments, so that's a way to meet your friends! Finally, in my opinion the pokemon go have a disadvantage is sometime maybe is dangrous to play it on the street. Some people just to be obsession of the game and ignora the surround, when come a car and maybe have a accidente. Besides, the children may addicts the game and bring the bad influnce of the study and hurt the sight cause they are young and they need more protection of the sight. All thing has the advantage and the disadvantage, we should use the smartphone in the right way and take the advantge of the good time to work and study. Sometime when you get tired you can play a little of this kind of game to relax it's okay! Thank you all to read my article!

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Here's the 2nd half of your corrections.

Secondly is I think it's a good way to recognise the new places and meet the new people. Sometime the people like to go to some new place to catch pokemons, like some the beach, mountains, rivers, parks. The Pokemon go has a good relationship with the Google maps, it lets you know some landmarks in somewhere(because that will lead you to get pokeballs, jeje). Sometime the place near to you hasve gyms, that you can fight to the on different equipments. The gyms is the placer where the friends make the unit teams to fight against the different equipments, so that's a way to make  meet your friends!
Finally, in my opinion the pokemon go has a disadvantage: It is sometime maybe is dangerous to play it on the street. Some people are just to be obsessed of  with the game and ignore their surroundings, when a car comes a car and maybe have an they could have an accident. Besides, Also the children may might get addicted to the game and bring the bad influnce of the which could negatively affect their study and hurt their sight. Because they are young and they need more protection of their sight.

I can't correct any more as italki won't let me.

jeje is a Spanish interjection, the english version is he he or ha ha

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Thanks for telling me about Pokemon Go! Now I understand the hype!

Here are your corrections ( i have done the first half here and i'll do the second half in another comment because italki only lets me have 5000 characters)

My ideas about Pokemon go

Hello everybody,
It have has been such a so long time since I have spoken or written English. no haven't speak English neither write English's article, now I am have graduated from the Master of UB, and my new job asked me to have a high level of the English, I'm so nervous. I practiced with my Spanish partner but he has the a Spanish accent tone and many times we don't understand the each other that we what each other has said we talked. So, it's the time to requierd your I found an English native speakers to help me correct the my errors and get to a the higher level.
Now let me talk about the this new application, the very famous and very popular smart phone game--"pokemon go".
Well, first of all, I think that pokemon go helps us to do the exercise in the outdoors and breathe the fresh air(now my partner is obsessed of with this game and always goes out to let the pokemon get out of the eggs and find the new pokemons. Before that he never got out to do the exercise, that's amazing, no?)
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Hello, 月牙儿 I wish I could correct the article, but I can only have 5000 letters. I'll give you some tips instead. I think what you should improve first is your articles (a, an, the). Not all nouns need an article. Most of the time, you just need to remember which ones shouldn't have one. There are two different types of nouns in English. I'll call them "number nouns" and "liquid nouns" (They are names I made up). Number nouns are things you can count. I can have 1 house or 2 houses. Houses is a number noun. Liquid nouns are things you can't count. You can't say 1 exercise or 2 exercises. You can't say 1 fresh air or 2 fresh airs. Number nouns usually need an article, and liquid nouns usually don't. You can say "the exercise" if you want to emphasize the noun, but you can't say "a exercise" or "an air." There is another word that is like an article. "Some." It's the plural of "a" or "an." (a friend, some friends) But a lot of the time, you can leave out the word. (a friend, friends) I don't have a Skype, but if you want to practice writing some more, you can send me a message. I hope this was clear enough and that you learned something new today. :)

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