The lemon tree
There was a big young lemon tree in front of my house, the owner planted this tree 8 (eight) years ago approximately (next to her garage). Every morning we used to listen to the birds' singing. Many breeding were received year after year for this beautiful young lemon tree. A variety types of birds like: little yellow breast birds, brown little pigeos, and smaller birds (different colors) used to lived in the lemon tree. By the evening we could see how they used to come back to their bird nest and sing for a while before to go to sleep. But today everything has changed for all this beautiful birds.
The new occupant brought three men and between all of them cut down the tree, trunk and branches were chopped into small pieces. They just leave a stump.
I'm sad just watching how birds flit around the stump and small bushes close to the stump. All of them flying again and again looking for their nests in the lemon tree and how their sing at the same time louder than usual like a non-intelligible language birds.
We need to plant trees not to kill them. I'm sad. :(
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The lemon tree
There was a bigThe new occupant brought three men and between all of them cut down the tree, and the trunk and branches were chopped into small pieces. They just
I'm sad just watching how the birds flit around the stump and small bushes close to the stump. All of them flying again and again looking for their nests in the lemon tree and how
We need to plant trees not to kill them. I'm sad. :(
Please feel free to make corrections, adding linking and native phrases to help my paragraph
You could say the owner planted this tree 8 (eight) years ago approximately, but it sounds better to me if you say the owner planted this tree approximately 8 (eight) years ago.
Normally a big tree is an old tree not a young tree. Did you intend to say old tree? (although 8 years old is not very old for a tree)
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Dan ..I'm glad to hear that. Guapo Carlos neither my friend. :) LOL
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Dr. Rodriguez would never have done this. :P
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